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| jimmy-barnes-13 2008-01-15 ch 18, | abuseOk I just read all of this and it is amazing! I love it, so please please! update asap :D |
| Lindethiel 2006-12-14 ch 18, anon. | abuseomg! u updated! YAY! *BIG hug!* thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! but ARGH! you left it at a cliffie! gr! plz update soon? |
| LupinandHarry 2006-11-28 ch 18, | abuseomg! wow awesome. I loved the end it was like jaw-dropping. Update soon okay?! It did take u a long time to update, but as long u are consistant for a while its okay ;) |
| GabrielSilk 2006-03-13 ch 17, | abuseNice! Are you going to kill Legolas in this one? I know, I know, he's my fav elf and muse as well, but I "forgot" to take my evil pill today and my dark side is running wild, involving more evil laughter than necessary! What? I like laughing! Anyway, Ungoliant should kill/ nearly kill young Thranduilion here, and then Aragorn thinks he's dedd and has an angst moment. And stuff... anyway, keep posting, I want to see how this turns out. Although if the Valar couldn't get rid of Ungoliant I don't kniow how Gandalf, a mere Istar, would. On the other hand, He is a very POWERFUL Istar... and he has the help of some very powerful elf-lords, and one elf who seems to not mind dying too much... *looks pointedly at Legolas* although he may be past the suicidal stage now that he knows exactly what being killed by Ungoliant means. Also, Ungoliant should have the help of her daughter, currently living in Cirith Ungol. Shelob'd be useful in a battle, especially if Merry and Eowyn pretended they were proper soldiers of the Mark again, bringing along Pippin, FRODO and SAM, who aren't, suffice to say, fond of Shelob... anyway, keep posting. Namarie for now; elen sila lummen' omentiuelvo (for translation see FotR) Navaer! Namarie! |
| Sashenka Greenleaf 2005-12-30 ch 17, | abuseI hope that you continue this soon.It is very unique and well written,wonderful job,keep up the good work! |
| Jedi Padfoot 2005-04-05 ch 17, | abuseI like your story. It's well written. I love your choice of songs in chapter 15 those some of my fav's. |
| sun-star-n-moon 2005-03-17 ch 17, | abuseIts a shame you have never read harry potter. The twins in there are just two of the characters that got lost when the book was turned into the movie, but yes in the books they are huge troublemakers. This chapter was rather short, and there wasn't must action in, but I guess it gave poor legolas a break.(he definitly needs one.)keep up the writting! P.S. In my last review when I said first story, I meant the first story of this sequal( They are all going to die). sorry for the confusion. |
| Deana 2005-03-10 ch 17, | abuseYOU POSTED! YAY! *dances a merry jig* Great chapter! I can't wait for more! ;) |
| Stridergal Silvertounge 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is great! I t is well written and I reallhy enjoyed it. *clicks favorites list button* |
| sun-star-n-moon 2004-11-30 ch 16, | abuseHey the twins are back. i rather liked their character, they kinda reminded me of the weasley twins in Harry Potter or a t least they did in your first story. Keep on writting! |
| Cherazz22784 2004-11-13 ch 16, | abuseWow! What a gruesome nightmare for poor Legolas:) The poor elf just doesn't get a break, does he? Lol:P Great chapter:) I'm still very excited for Ungoliant's destruction:) Update soon:) And lol, I've never noticed Legolas standing differently in the throne room of Minas Tirith...I'll have to look, lol:P Until next time;) |
| Coolio02 2004-11-09 ch 16, | abuse*shivers* Legolas being buried alive was quite chilling...but well-written! Another good chapter and I hope you continue soon:-) |
| Deana 2004-11-06 ch 16, | abuseYOU POSTED! *dances a merry jig* Oh wow...oh my gosh that buried-alive scene was amazing! Poor Legolas! I can't wait for chap 17! ;) |
| Cherazz22784 2004-09-24 ch 15, | abuseAww! Cute chapter, Aragorn helping Legolas fall asleep:) That's some gooding reading;) Hmm...but I'm not as pleased to hear that Legolas is going to fall from a TREE? Wah! Poor Legolas, he takes such abuse, but he's too beautiful to be damaged, thank the gods:) I liked this chapter, great work:) |
| sun-star-n-moon 2004-09-24 ch 15, | abuseYay ! New Chapter! *smiles* I really don't have much to say other than, like always, your story is so great!...even if you do torture my fvaorite elf... but I must live past this. I guess it only shows how strong he really is. Update soon! |