I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed this story, thank you for writing such an enjoyable non-slash story. I also wanted to let you know that I selected this tale to be included in a C2 group I manage which showcases non-slash completed stories which feature any elf other than Legolas. While I am certainly not an expert at what makes a good story I have read a LOT of stories which could fit into my chosen category but have only selected a few to add to the C2 group. Thank you for writing such a wholesome story which can be enjoyed by people of all ages. If you know of any other stories which you believe should be included in the C2 group please don’t hesitate to suggest them.

Thank you for sharing your talent,

washow

I love it so far! ^^ It's very amusing and I can't wait to hear more!

LOL! Oh, I love the twins, especially when they're younger. And who would've thought to see the dignified Lord Elrond engaged so much in a snowball fight that he missed the arrival of his wife? This is extremely entertaining, Artemis-E... Dare I hope for more of the same?
Elysia

Loving this so far. Continue!!

Nicely done, you've set up the tale quite well.
Two little things: it is called the Hall of Fire, not Fire Hall and I do not think either twin would refer to their parents as Celebrian and Elrond, they would always call them mother and father or the elvish words for that!
Othewise good start!

I think it's a good start and hope u update soon

hehe I like it so far. please continue.:)

Beautifully written. I love a good Elrohir & Elladan fan fic, and those are hard to find. Keep writing!