Great Story

So meaningful, beautifully crafted.

Dunno why no one bothers reviewing though.

Beautiful work

beautiful. oh so beautiful. the language is so in depth. thier are so many fnatsitc sentences that sitck in my mind. you have a wonderful way with words, you truley do. and a very indepth concept as well. i loved the characters, espacily 'the comanders son' you descirbed him fantacticaly well.

Hey,i like ur fic but as far as titles go,its almost like your shift button is broken.(Meaning,you dont use capitals).Anyways,besides the many spaces,this story is really creative and neatly written.Squall`s son rules!