great story

Perfect ending. Loved it.

Lydecker is totally the consummate villain. I wish we saw more of him in the series. He was so good.

Keep writing!

-goes to check out your other work-

Ahh...that was perfect with Max killing Murdoch, and Lydecker getting to rub it in that she did...and then her getting angry but lydecker seemingly unscathed as she just is knocked out with tazers...

It's just the thing that makes Lydecker such a great villian!

It's a good story but I have to say I was hoping for a happier ending or a continuation till they got through the aftermath of events.But the story is well writtin and well thought out. Great job.

very good! whana reade more about it.. =) so please hurry up!

Wow. Bravo. Probably the best written story I've read on this site. I thoroughly enjoyed it and will be on the lookout for more stuff, assumming you plan on writing more. Again, absolutely amazing.

Great ep, great ep indeed. I like it very much.
One thing though, Not sure about Max and the gun.
IMO she would never have used it, but thats just me. Otherwise great ep, really like Lydecker in this ep. Showing off that he never can be trusted, always with his own agenda and on his own side. Have he done something else with Logan?

Not to pick a fight or to get on anybodys bad-side but: Forgive and forget is the words for everbody(dunno what this is about so I probly shouldnt open my mouth), this fandom has seen enough... and we need to stay united to fend off those pesky M/A´s ;)

Ah, enough Ghandism from me. Great work, its much appreciated. I hope you intend to continue on your AS2 :)

Peace.Out

This is disgusting that catherder/harper and Kasman, who are VS3 writers would behave so badly.

I'm ashamed of them.

This was really good. One small thing though: The development with Logan was so fast!! I guess this is just because I'ma weird Logan fan, but I think you might have given it a little more attention instead of having him up and about like this. But this is just me- I really loved the chapter´! You are doing an amazing job. and there is gonna be more to come, right?

It's not how good the writing is, it's how good the characters are written and if the story is interesting. The writing is a far third for most fans.

Star24 writes Max and Logan and all S1 characters so well that you FEEL like you are in S1. Who cares about the periods, commas and spelling stuff.

I suppose that none of you people who are taking potshots at me even noticed that I didn't CRITIQUE star's WRITING. It's irrelevant whether she's a lousy, good, or great writer. I was concerned about a possible problem. There have been at least three instances of it lately, both in regard to VS3 stuff and other people's fanfic.

I reread "Radio, Radio" and IMO, sending out an electronic signal to disable a communications chip is different from using a mini-pulse to completely disable the effect of that chip. I stand by my original position.

You're the best writer of DA fic. Ever. Pay no attention to that jealous harper whatever.

What a horrible person and a disgrace to Dark Angel and VS3. An ugly person, too.

Personal grudges? You're the one who bans people from the DAR message board because of something said in a completely different forum, such as a review on FFN. Don't talk to me about grudges. You are the grudge queen.

Harper is Catherder! OMG. She is a writer herself and a member of VS3. How could she be this stupid.

She can write ok but can't write Max worth anything. She's probably a good beta, just not good writing characters.

I'm ashamed for her.

If we are going to go looking for sources of ideas I refer you to my story Radio,Radio written two years ago, which was the first use of the idea that the Red implants could be remotely disabled. I could easily say that VS3 needs to credit me.

Anyone who has done any reading or attended any movies, knows that there is no such thing as an original plot idea. As has been said, there are only seven basic plots in literature. Period. It's the way a story is told that counts. How many times have two movies come out at the same time with the same storyline? We've all seen it. It happens people. Without any nefarious goings on causing it.

If people continue to use reviews to air personal grudges, I will report the offenders to fanfiction.net for abuse of the forum.

I apologize to the readers who have been subjected to this.

Star