 Spife 6/19/04 . chapter 1 Wow! That was really cute! Sad, but cute. Good song, and I liked the way Riley spoke. It could have been a bit longer maybe, and you could have had a bit more introduction, instead of just jumping right in. But otherwise, great )
*why am I reading all these fics from seasons ago? Oh thats right... cause it's all over! WA!* |