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| Dizzles the Dizzy 2007-11-13 ch 12,  | abuseThis just happens to be a good story. You did well, but, I still have to wonder why none of the other superheros could be called up? |
| Lumenadducere 2004-07-06 ch 12, | abuseHey Matt! I'd been meaning to read this story for a while, and I actually finished a month or so ago, but haven't gotten around to reviewing 'till now. Anyways, great job with this. I always like it when Spider-Man meets up with other Marvel characters, especially those from X-Men, and this was no exception. Maybe after the YGO! series you could work on another spidey fic? Anyways, looking forward to next chappie of Future. Take care |
| possom2009 2004-03-26 ch 2, | abusecool.uh...yeah,cool! |
| LayzReedar 2003-12-08 ch 12, anon. | abuseThumb up - Would have like to have seen more Point-of-View of both side- Action and Reaction to certain events. Such R&R for yourself. Emotions as such. Such as Such I think no matter Any chance Of Space Above and Beyond Battlestar Galactica Crossover? |
| BoxerMan 2003-10-21 ch 12, | abuseGood characterization of Spidey and of Magneto. Excellent story. |
| Skittles the Sugar Fairy 2003-10-20 ch 12, | abuseNice |
| daveykins 2003-10-19 ch 11, | abuseAn excellent story there - with great character work. Would be great to see a follow up with Spidey teaming up with the Xmen perhaps :) |
| Clones-for-Breakfast 2003-10-19 ch 12, | abuse::stands up and applauds:: Wo! You've taken us for a lovely ride with this story, well written, very good. I've enjoyed it muchly, enough to log in an leave a review just for you! but you deserve it, so have fun! ::continues applauding:: |
| Elleira 2003-10-16 ch 10, | abuseTruly an excellent piece of work! You portray the pain and difficulties of both aspects of Peter's life quite skillfully. I have thouroughly enjoyed reading this story! Please update when you can! |
| ShadowShock 2003-10-11 ch 10, | abuseYeah! Go Spidy! Oh, and uh, you to Matt Morwell. =) Great job! Love the ending battle in this chapter! Keep it up! |
| Skittles the Sugar Fairy 2003-10-11 ch 10, | abuseKEWL! I can't wait to see how this all ends, hopefully all goes well for our favorite webslinger! Please hurry with an update, I don't think I can wait long! |
| Appreciative reader 1 2003-10-07 ch 9, anon. | abuseThe policeman's point of view was very good and adds a lot of depth. Your action scenes are excellent. |
| sam 2003-10-02 ch 8, anon. | abusethis story is rad as. well written especialy the fighting with good description but not overloaded and long winded. keep writting cant wait for the next chapters. i want toad to fight spidey or even work in the story line from the comics where spiderman talks toad out of suicide. |
| ShadowShock 2003-10-01 ch 8, | abuseAction, wow, cool! =) 'specially loved the part about remote. Yes, the action scenes were great as well! Umm, couldn't spot anything... not that I was really trying, too caught up in the story as I was. So...what happens next?? =) |
| Spiderbob 2003-10-01 ch 8, | abuseWow. Just read your story. Very nice. But, uh, I was wondering if you know that Spider-Man isn't a mutant. I mean, he could be in this story since it's yours and you can do with him as you please in your story, but it seemed as though you were kinda following the comics and I didn't see any note saying that this wasn't branched off the comics or movie or that it was an alternate universe and now I'm saying these really long run off sentence because I'm afraid that this has already been cleared up and now I'm making myself look like an idiot and...I'm going to be quiet now. Anyway, very good. Keep it up. |