This was great - v funny! :)

An awesome little story, i love that episode!

Great! I just finished watching the Out of Mind Two Parter and this was a really nice little addition. I hadn't really thought about it but Carter was disobeying his orders in a sense. But of course, I'm very glad she did. :)

nice characterization! A very good snip of time, with some nice feelings expressed without being said. Good work.

i like it.
it's simple and straight to the point. what more could someone ask for in a story?
great job!

Great story...well written i really enjoyed the depiction of carter...good job..is there more?