Most excellent!

i hate the ending

i hate you i hate you i hate you


i also hate that it didnt say from ron or anything and I dont like reading letters whenn the other person does not write back

but i liked your story

Interesting. I think wrote it well. And I agree Percy isn't evil, he's just confused and doesn't realize family is more important than success. Well written and nicely done.

just had to tell you i totally agree with everything you say about ron. he isnt my favourite character but he is one of them and he really annoyus me when people have him betray harry, or have him stupid or downtrodden in their stories. obviously trht isnt going to happen. look what he is doing now going to find the horocuxes with harry. obviously ron as a charcter is quite volotile and can get quite angry but thaT IS JUST HOW HE IUS. AS far as i am concerned he has expereinced nearly everything harry has. if u havent read it read the stories by abraxan the refiners fire and the time of destiny. they capture ron brilliantly.

and i have to tell you i think your on take on ron is perfect. just like jks. he has that just humnouress personallity.

well done.

omg, i love this SO MUCH!

That was...awesome...I don't have any other way to describe it...This is definately going to my Favourite's list...

Love it. Absolutely perfect. This is Ron exactly as I imagined him writing a letter. Have you done the follow-up yet? YOu should!

Wow, that was so...Ron. I could feel the raw emotion. Please continue.

Excellent! Very well done. I loved how confident Ron was of something he didn't know how to explain. "I know. I just know." And how confused he was. Why did Percy have to be the way he was? And the letter had just the right amount of anger. You're right; I don't believe Percy is evil per say (pardon the pun), just kind of confused. And hurt himself. And still too proud to admit any of it. I think you typed Ron very well in this and I look forward to the follow-up.

please please PLEASE write the second letter! I agree that the scene with the "sever ties" letter was one of Ron's finer moments, and I really need to hear Ron give Percy a piece of his mind for that horrible letter. You have mastered Ron's voice very well. You are right to say that Percy is not evil but just confused- but ron is much too close to the situation to see that. that inability to understand that comes with anger and frustration was addressed perfectly in this. write more of it, please!

That was amaazing as well. You really have a way of writing Ron's perspective. Especially when he's displaying so much emotion.

This was really good. I always knew that the other members of the the Weasley family were hurt, but i never really thought about it. The letter was very...real, do you know what I mean? Well, great fic.

Wow. Very angry, very hurt.

I just loved this! I would love you to make a sequel to say, of Percy's reaction to when he gets this letter. I would so read it. Please write more!

hey, ron now has the emotional range of a tablespoon! jk, lol! i really like it and look forward to the next part... ;D