fin this story and make more pietro stories

Interesting idea for a story. Maybe you should get a little more into Pietro's head though, show that he has dreams about it when he isn't on it, or something like that.
It's a good story so far, so update soon!

i love you! i love this story, it's so sweet^^

please keep writing!

cute! ...but SAD! poor p!
n e wayz... love kittyz attitude! ya, that rite! pie'z better for u n e wayz!
make pietro stop taking heroine at the end and make him musculary again!... >:D ;)
and make him b a bit of a jerk... after all, that IS his character
...but i suppose someone on heroine wouldn't have time 2 b a jerk...
maybe later?
ok im talkin WAY TOO MUCH!

looks good so far, keep going with this, it seems interesting.

please write more like this story so update

yeah I like this story so please write more

love this story so please write more and update

Hmm . . . interesting premise, and I think you're a good writer (grammar and spelling is good, and the story keeps moving. No really grating descriptions or confusing parts, very nice). I haven't seen more than an episode of this series, so I can't comment on O-O-C or whatever.

hurry up and continue already! PLEASE! i love pietro stories, so this may be a bit prejudice but, i really liked reading your fanfic!

sounds good so far

Oh. My poor little Pietro. Hes all alone. He needs a girlfriend. Cough-Rogue-Cough.

I loveded it

cute, i like it!!

LOL yeah! more kietro!! Hehe I think you've got a pretty good plot... I really can't w8 4 more! Hope 2 c a new chap up soon!