plz update soon

finish this story please!

You seriously need to update, if for no one else but me. I'm seriously interested in this fic!

I love it. You must continue(:

fin this story and make more pietro stories

Interesting idea for a story. Maybe you should get a little more into Pietro's head though, show that he has dreams about it when he isn't on it, or something like that.

It's a good story so far, so update soon!

i love you! i love this story, it's so sweet

please keep writing!

cute! ...but SAD! poor p!

n e wayz... love kittyz attitude! ya, that rite! pie'z better for u n e wayz!

make pietro stop taking heroine at the end and make him musculary again!... :D ;)

and make him b a bit of a jerk... after all, that IS his character

...but i suppose someone on heroine wouldn't have time 2 b a jerk...

maybe later?

ok im talkin WAY TOO MUCH!

looks good so far, keep going with this, it seems interesting.

please write more like this story so update

yeah I like this story so please write more

love this story so please write more and update

Hmm . . . interesting premise, and I think you're a good writer (grammar and spelling is good, and the story keeps moving. No really grating descriptions or confusing parts, very nice). I haven't seen more than an episode of this series, so I can't comment on O-O-C or whatever.

hurry up and continue already! PLEASE! i love pietro stories, so this may be a bit prejudice but, i really liked reading your fanfic!