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Kurt Baros aka The Falcon
2009-09-22 . chapter 2
i like this story alot and i loved the first movie only the others sucked a$$ and the series was good to. you make ranma being an immortal seem like it could have happened and i hope that you continue this series
Dlikee
2007-12-09 . chapter 2
good story, please update.
Puppet in the Corner
2004-04-11 . chapter 2
Hmm... I'm guessing the Sensei being Soujirou Hiko? It's just my guess though...
headsouth
2004-03-03 . chapter 2
This story is great, I've always loved Ranma/Nabiki fics...please update very soon...you have great grammer. ^_^
Rain Urameshi
2004-02-16 . chapter 2
ok, this is probably the first and only highlander/ranma fic out there and i would like to see it continued.
dennisud
2004-01-08 . chapter 2
What a friggin good fic ya got there.
Not only did you seemlessly wove the Ranma characters into the Hilander reality.
Now I may have missed it but Isn't McLeod named Duncan in the TV series?
Otherwise I have a keen feeling who found Nabiki's papar and It going to hit the perverbial fan.
oh and as I read it's not only Ranma affected... but Ryouga too?
Wonder if he'd hidden a katana in that umbrella of his!
;-)
dennisud
Rogue1615
2004-01-08 . chapter 2
I enjoyed this chaoter. I had thought you had abandoned this a while ago. I am really looking forward to ranma getting his memories back. Two things. You never said how olg ranma is and you also never said the immortals opinion on the KI techniques. It stands to reason if ranma can do that he can learn to manipulate all the power in his quickining.
Till later,
ROgue
genknight
2004-01-08 . chapter 2
nice fic ;) hm maybe battousai Nabiki ? LOL
Brett W. Hall
2004-01-08 . chapter 2
An exceptional piece of writing so far...
And yet, perhaps, now that the background has been set...
I'm suspecting that Nabiki, herself, is an unrealized immortal. After all, at this point, I can't see any other reason for Ranma allowing Nabiki to follow him all the way to Paris, and then spend about a month with her.
If she isn't, then Ranma has been setting them both up for tragedy, as they would be incapable of having children, and Nabiki would eventually grow old and die, while he lived on. If she wasn't, it would have been kinder to erase her memory of what they'd shared.
Looking forward to reading more of this, perhaps picking up the story in the present time, rather than looking into the past.
Paul Varela
2003-12-05 . chapter 1
hey could we get more chapters to the storys?
Kura-kun
2003-09-18 . chapter 1
hmm...promising story to continue, hopefully you'll write some more...

I didn't notice any glaring errors...just sometimes the story gets...choppy and then smooths out again...

Later
yasuhei
2003-09-16 . chapter 1
Liked the story, and I'd like to see some more of it, and see if things work out for Ranma and Nabiki or not :)

However, I did notice that on a few occasions you changed between tenses unexpectadly between paragraphs. Once you changed between 1st and 3rd person perspective mid-scene. Fix that, and it'd be marvelous :)

Keep on trucking.

yasuhei
DQ
2003-09-12 . chapter 1
Very interesting concept. I hope you continue this. It would be interesting to see the mishrooms side effects on immortals.
DarkBlueHated
2003-09-12 . chapter 1
Awesome. And I always love Ranma Nabiki pairings becuase they're always sophisticated or has alot of twist and turns. Little explanations here and there.

Well, this one looks VERY interesting and I hope you continue it. Good luck!
Bookstick
2003-09-12 . chapter 1
I think that this is a good story. Please write a sequel! I think that it would be cool to see that Ranma is WAY older then everyone thinks.
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