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Reviews For: On The Headmaster's Secret Service

JTBJAB
2005-10-18
ch 4,
abuseOh man! That is an evil ending - and I am the queen of evil endings! Therefore I must step down *bows head* and let you take my role as the leader of all evil endings!
Kate Lynn
2003-12-08
ch 4,
abuseI loved it! The writing was excellent, capturing my attention and drawing me right in. The characterizations were also perfect, and the overall plot intriguing. Tightly woven and really enjoyable. Thanks so much for this! 8-)
Kate Lynn
Bard's Soul
2003-11-18
ch 4,
abuseOh, a body guard style cliff-hanger, nice.

All I can think of to improve is: More magic/gun combos!

Thanks for the preview!
Headmaster Cromwell
2003-11-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseI was wondering if you would be interested in joining my Harry Potter Online Roleplaying game. There we roleplay as though we are students attending the magical school Salem. This includes going to classes, making friends, having adventures, ect. The link to the main page is:

http://w.geocities.com/headmaster_cromwell/

The link to the Velvet Hall is:

http://disc.server.com/Indices/208060.html

Hope you'll come join us. :) Cheers!
Bard's Soul
2003-11-10
ch 3,
abuseThis has the same kind of ring as with Dave, when he was knocked out and imprisoned with Lord Asriel. It also seems kind of familiar to "The Twisted Cross" a lot darker than the first part, and right to the action. Keep at it!
Bard's Soul
2003-11-10
ch 1,
abuseI could kiss you! However, being that I am not like Fran (gay, that is), I shall refrain. Liberal, mentally insane and an iMac! YES!
Danny Barefoot
2003-10-09
ch 2,
abuseErm...'The twisted cross' did nothing to prepare me for this! Bombs, shootings, coverups, and this distinctive off-beat, cynical humour i'm already beginning to recognise. The line about Lupin licking something was hilarious, the thing with the car and machine gun was a tiny bit abrupt, Mytle and Cedric ARGH, you really have no shame do you?
Kittenmommy
2003-09-19
ch 1,
abuseOh my God, I'm LOL'ing hysterically... the bit about Remus finding that a certain something wasn't all it was cracked up to be, and the mental picture of Snape learning to use an iMac..oh my! Hurry up and write more of this craziness, please! And I love the daughter you've given Remus and Amanda - LOL'ing all over again at the idea of a real "dese dose dem" New Yorker going to Hogwarts!
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