I haven't read such a good story in a while! Good job!

:D

Honestly I made it part-way thru chapter 20 before I got totally disgusted with this story. One, Harry was not behaving in even the slightest way like a normal person would when being given 3 babies to take of. No he is not normal but that is not an excuse but lazy writing. No information was given to him at all about the babies and Dumbledores plan for him to take care of the kids long term truly disgust me. Who does he think he is to just dump someones babies onto someone else without a so much as a "by you leave". Harry's blind acceptance of this makes me want to scream. He has to much on his shoulders already but as usual no one cares about him. Then to make matters worse he is totally and completely betrayed by his friends when they go into his pensieve. What does he do- HE JUST ACCEPTS IT AND THEN APOLOGISES TO THEM! Time for a reality check here. NOONE in this story is deserving of any compassion or even understanding by the reader. Instead every character in this story (with the exception of possibly Petunia) has earned the same disgust from the reader that a deatheater would have received. Truly a let down. Needless to say I will not be finishing this story.

Very good, overall

4/10.

What's with these mini chapters?.?.?.?.?
I spend more time pressing next than scrolling down..

Why kill so many of the da?

Reading

that was the longest story I have ever read and loved it too...umm..Andy said dada, Lech did her frist magic, what did Sam do?

I NEED MORE, that was AWESOME I LOVED IT ,,first fanfic I have read all the way through in about a year:)

so neat

awesome

like it

:)

nice