I don't care how long ago you wrote this but it's really good! I loved the different movie titles 'House on Haunted Hill' rocks! Am going to read What dreams may come now but it might take me awhile! I betting its really REALLY good!

I like it-- the sweetness and power of them together-- please continue

EW! YOU SICK SICK PERSON! ONCE AGAIN...*throws shoe at author and knocks them unconcious* YOU DISGUSTING DISGUSTING PERSON!
*throws other shoe and kills author's computer*
-CLUNK-

Now, behave or I'll have to come back.

Signed,

~*~ The Shoe Thrower ~*~

Please write more! love it!

hey good story but They should hae watched House on Haunted Hill cuz Famke Janssen's in it so she plays Jean get it?

Woo-hoo, new chapter! I really like this story. The Scott/Jean interaction is great. And the scene on the sofa...whew! Is it warm in here? **fans self** Great job!

what!?!?!? "OH MY GODD YALL MADE OUT" confusing...oh well mabye i shouldnt read recent stories...i just have to wait really long to read the next chap. by the way, EW! *throws shoe at author* EW! on the part about Scott EW!

very cute

I am enjoying this so much. Really liked the deli scene, very well described and written.

Loved this sentence...
"Laden with shopping bags, they let the fingers of their free hand intertwine, intricately like that of a twist of copper strands, forming a physical connection of two individual bodies."

More please... but I'll be patient for great chapters like this.

Em

Beautiful and sweet. Keep writing!

Aw... so cute! Good job, I hope to see more soon! ^_^

You tease! The different POV’s of how Scott and Jean perceive the same situation differently is wonderful to follow. I’m trying to figure out the surprise and it’s killing me. Good luck on your Preliminary Exams. I know about busy schedules and how your life can take unexpected turns – so hang in there!
Em

i absolutely LOVED this story. i cant wait to read your next one...oh, and good luck for your A levels.
:-)

Again, very cute. Will there be more?

That was excellent. Please, keep writing