Aww loved it ^^

man that was touching. keep up the good work!!

WOOW!! Such a sad but great story!! Keep up the great work!!

This is so sad! I really liked it though. Good job. -Lena

Oh! THat's a sad story, and it's really good! *Off to read the sequel*

...Gawd. I loved this. I am also hooked on your writing now and will read anything you release. (lucky you. *G*) What an amazingly-handled piece. Of course now I have to go read the sequel.

What a coincidence...I read that fic before I read this...^_^;; Nevertheless, it's very touching.

Aw, I love this fic. Its so well written, and so good! ..And sad. I'm sad. But I loved how she saw the worry in Kyo's eyes, and how she was only concerned about seeing whether Kyo was alright before she died...? It was really sweet. Onto the sequel!

How sad...you're really a good writer. You should do Kyo's prospective to this. That would be interesting. This is really good. You're going on my author alert list. ^_^

This is amazing... it's wonderful.. it's just so simple, yet brilliant. You are a great artist, being able to make something like this. It's pleasant, and loving, and sad, but not full of emotion. Well, it is, but not the sappy kind. Just the plain, simple, clean kind. You are very awesome.

WAAH, can't you do the same story with a happy ending please oh this story is making me cry. Pretty Please ?

and here i thouht that it would be such a great fic since noone is writing about Kagura and Kyo but it was sad.She dies.But yoou really did a goodjob. I commend you.

Ouch. Ouch. Ouch... That was awfully sad *sniffle*...
Really well written, I enjoyed the whole thing. I was hoping for a happier end but this one suits me just fine as well ^^
Mousey

NO *SOBBING* NO she's sucha happy genki girl! i honestly think she's be so great with kyo! i luv kyo and i like her therefore they must be great together! dun kill her off!

*sniffle* kagura! T_T *sobs* poor kagura!
but nicely written...but..kagura!! @_@ aya!