Its been awhile since ive read this and I still love it are you still going to finish this? because you really should

Aww poor Kouji. Thi is a good story update soon please.

I was so happy when I found this fic again caz I read this fic a year or two ago and couldn't find it later on... but i found it again and yea.. UPDATE? >"< I realy want to know what happened!

Please continue. Great job, but continue please

Amaizing chapter... please continue with it!

Update soon. I thinks this story is getting to me...oh well good job.

good chapter, but grammer was off. makes it kinda hard to understand.

the grammer's a bit better. really cool story! really like it!

Glad you're updating it ^^
I've been waiting for months..
PLease continue!! yOu can't stop there
Poor Kouji...I can't wait till he met Kouichi

Yeah you should keep going it's well writen

It's an interesting fic.

I wouldn’t say that Kouji is ‘slow’ because he isn’t, but I guess there’s AU in this. You’re sorta on the right track with Kouichi’s personality though. To me, Kouji is just a guy who tries to do stuff using the utter least energy that he can^.^ And also… is isn’t Kouichi suppose to like Kouji as a brother??

Where do I start first?

-Your grammar is horrible. Did you proofread this? Your spelling is fine, but you've got to work on your grammar skills before you write anything else.

"I´m not a bad boy it is just that this situation get worse when you are the big brother, you are responsable of your twin, your twin is slow with everything and your parents doesn´t love you."

Does that make any sense to you? It shouldn't.

-You kept changing the POV. You wrote it in first person and 3rd person POVs(point of view) without any warning that you'd be changing. It's very condusing to read.

-You said this was an AU fic. Even so AUs MUST keep the character's personalities. The only one you got remotely right was Kouichi's. Kouji is not slow in any way, shape, or form. Their mom didn't abandon them, and no respectable woman would EVER abandon her kids. Their dad is not a violent man, nor a work-aholic, although since it's AU I'll let that slip. Finally, no parent would ever say they didn't want a kid even if they were slow. Being "slow" has nothing to do with being loved or not. But as I said before, Kouji isn't slow in the least.

I believe that this could be a decent fic if a lot of improvements are made.