Love doesn't conquer all, in the end. Great job, Max always kind of pissed me off.

Ouch. That was good. And the ending is the kicker. I like all the water stains on the ceiling stuff. The imagery is very effective. The turns that Liz’s feelings take through this and her thoughts are just great.

*bangs head on desk repeatedly*

*wipes away a tear*

That was good. BUT WHY IS EVERYONE KILLING OFF LIZ! lol

Katydid