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| A Random Fan 2003-09-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is good, I look foward to reading more of this! |
| Inaniyor 2003-09-13 ch 2,  | abuseYou know, I think I'm liking this. The first chapter was great, at any rate. The second chapter threw me off a bit, but I'm still holding on :) I like the first chapter because the characters and setting are so... unexceptional, which I love, but you write it very well. It's just a normal caravan of the North, nothing really special, showing the life of traveling traders. The second chapter I liked less, because I'm not fond of god-to-mortal conversations much. Guns in Forgotten Realms also bother me a bit, even though I know they can/could exist. But the fact that it's well-written and nothing's gone overboard keeps my interest. Write more, please? |