thanx for the story
it's so great
please update your other story salvation!

This is aweful! I can't read anymore! Please delete it and learn to write.

oh please please write the sequel to this!! and please update Salvation!

Best story ever. I realy can't wait for the sequel :)

So yeah I guess I lied. I am Kittens With Ribbons and Miya. Yeah I reviewed with three different Pen names because your that awesome.

This story fills me with Glee. Cheers to you.

It started off kinda slow but the pace picked up. It was real intense toward the end and very graphic. I enjoyed it and will await a sequel. :P

Good GOD this is one of, if not THE, best fanific i have read!! This was years ago you published, so I'm a bit late.. But I absolutely LOVED it. You have a fabulous imagination!

WOW!! that was the best fan fiction ive ever read i LOVED it! and i liked the way it was like lara was telling you the story from her perspective! well done :)

I believe I reviewed this not too long ago as "RileyZ KitteN" or something along the lines of that. I really love this fic, havng read it many times, plus I needed a way to get you on my faves list! Thank you for writing this!

Over? ALREADY!? Man...That stinks. It was a good story I must say. Longest story I've ever read but still good.

Hey there. When I first started reading this fic I was so attatched to it. It seriously just reeled me in and I couldn't get enough. It was really really good and I just hope that you'll maybe wanna do a sequel cause this one rocks!

Jordana Trent suggested I read this story, and I'm thrilled she did.The only word that comes to my mind is 'compact', meaning it's perfectly rounded up, easy to read but not banal, with a never slackening tension that culminates in a wondrous showdown.
Kurtis' tattoo reminded me of something I read in a book called 'Heroes and villains', by Angela Carter. I think you'd enjoy reading it if you like books.
I wonder if you named Kurtis 'Boranovich' because of his Boran-X. A very clever, original detail if so, though the slavic ring to it would be slightly odd as most of the christians in the Balkan countries belong to the orthodox church, which wouldn't really fit because of the strong links between 'Lux-Veritatis' and the catholic church. But of course, this isn't really relevant.
Anyway, I just wanted to say that this is, by far, the best story I've read here... and it will probably stay so, at least until you've finished Salvation.
As you wrote, 'the original gift is the language' You sure enough weren't standing behind the door the day god was passing out that gift. Applause!

i really loved this story-it was awsome!

That was really brilliant! Had me reading for hours! And I know another way Lara and Kurtis could bring back the blood line of the Lux Veritatis...

Hey, he may not be the last MAN on earth... but he's possibly the last Lux Veritatis...

XD

*applauds*

Well done Abby! You not only got it all finished, but it's really really good!

I think this story got better and better as it progressed, which is NOT to say that the early chapters aren't good, but that your writing became more assured as you continued.

The way you wrote Karel was very impressive-you gave him great dialogue, and you also added some layers to his character so he wasn't just a one dimensional bad guy-but without diluting his relentless evil. I have to deduct points for killing him so horribly (just kidding!) but I liked the way you dealt with the Nephilim threat by having another divine being intervene; it was unexpected,totally fitting, and nicely reminiscent of the Set/Horus confrontation from the Last Revelation.

The Lara/Kurtis relationship was very well written, and the idea that they will devote themselves to the renewal of the Lux Veritatis legacy was wonderful. It means they will be together in pursuit of a challenging goal, instead of settling into a life of cosy domesticity together-which would be a bit of a let-down and not really in keeping with their characters.

Good research on Cappadocia as well :-)

You should be really proud of this and I hope it encourages you to write more-I'm following Salvation keenly.

*hugz*