This is a great story! I can't wait for the next chapter! You would get more reviews if you excepted anonymous ones!

wow, great. ruddy original too, doubt anyone else has written about this. really like dung, he's great and infact all of them are exactly like jk would have written them if she wrote about people who didn't feel they needed to speak in capital letters every 5 pages and weren't called harry potter... sorry am rereading phoenix now and there are few words to describe just how much harry's annoying me. alot would be about right though.

anyway yes, really enjoying great character interaction, curious about whats going to happen later on too... are you going ot take a stab at what snape's been doing?

you are now officially added to my author alerts list so write quickly *grins*

Lol - I love it. Really good! Keep it up!

Well, well! I've certainly dicovered a gem here no doubt about that. An original 'missing moment' to pick, so to speak. You have a wonderful, descriptive writing style, and a wonderful use of enigma at the start of the story, when you describe the characters, but do not name them atright off. Excellent characterization, and very believeable storyline so far. I can't wait for more, and the inclusion of new Order members (Weasley's, Tonks and Kingsley), though I can't help but wonder at the romance. This is so good that I may even continue to read it if it's Lupin/Tonks, but... never mind. My own personal taste! Great story, keep writing!

Shieldmaiden

wow... i like your style of writing... very straightforward and clear, makes the story easy to read... and you have a nice way with words too. Keep this up! Looking forward to reading more.

Good story.

If you like Sirius, try this interesting Azkaban story I wrote.

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Hi! So it seems I'm the first to review this new story! I consider it a real honour!

I think it's very well written, and all the characters are, well, "in character". :))

I think is a nice idea describing the summer *before* OOtP, so you can write about Lupin and Sirius BOTH alive without having to figure out a way to "bring Sirius back" and therefore keeping more faithful to the real book.

I really can't wait to read more!

PS Sorry about your granmother...

Wow! Why has no one reviewed this story? Not only is it well written (no, EXTREMELY well written), but it has a very interesting plot! I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. You've got the characters down pat amazingly, and the plot is original! I'm sorry that no one has noticed this story, but good stories sometimes are lost within all of the riff raff, mediocre, and other good stories. Keep it up!