nice. update soon.

cool i like it. update soon. thanks.

You need to continue on! And yes, I guess I'd like to know who those people were. I hope Squall and Rin get together and sort that trouble out. That was a nice chapter, update soon..

ok so this is good. but i wish there would be a squall and rinoa conversation. anyway. nice.

hahah funny. i will read it. update soon.

i like ur story. hope you finish writin up the next chapter.

oo very nice. I think you need to update! rock on

ok only one thing has been bothering me through the whole fic that i haven't mentioned until now and here it is what's with the Ms.Name and Mr.Name? BTW good chapters

everything is good so far in fact it's great but a few uh grammar stuff is messed up... i suggest that you get a editor or something.

wow...your cthis chapter is great.I have been waiting for you to update your story for so long!Anyway,thanks for writing such a good fanfic!

this is good and i can't wait for more.

YEHAW (did I just say that? I think my hilbilly side is taking over.) someone finally told off Perilemia (think that's how it's spelled). it was a great chapter...as always. But Briand kind of creeps me out. He took way too many pictures of my dear Rinoa...that's just messed up. Who knows what he's gonna do with those pics. Plus I liked the party where Rinoa got drunk...that was pretty funny. Who would've thought Rinoa could hold that much liquor lol. Well, continue updating because this is about the only story on this site that seems to be updating that I read.

Ahh...so many comments (at least I think)

good chapter. your writing keeps getting better with every one, i think. i'm surprised that the two (Rinoa and Squall) have held out this long without just expressing their feelings. Of course, those two never come out and say it. plus they are teenagers. personally, i really like Selphie's character. she seems to be getting...i don't know...better. it's hard to explain, i just like selphie in this story. she reminds me of one of my friends. ahh, but who can't love a good squinoa flic, huh? u just can't really have a story with those two in it and not have them in love at some point. one more thing, who puts pickles on nachos? continue updating...i watching u. (happy birthday, if not too late)

WOW! WORDS CANNOT CONVEY! WONDERFULLY!

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER TOO!