I love it! T'was amazing! You're an awesome writer.

I think the ending was a bit too over-dramatic but still,

a great story with a good ending.

I might read your other fics cuz' your

writing style is a tad bit different than most writers.

Cya on your other fics!

TAIORA4EVER!

YOU BETTER MAKE THE ENDING TAIORA OR ELSE! Why is Tai so...unlike him? And Sora is too weak and frail...but the story, and the series is good so far.

this part was depressing. all except for the ending, which i luved!great work and really interesting ending_

I know I have read this before but this seems like a well written story to me. You have put a lot of work into this story and I can tell you are m number one author because of your writing style. Every time visit this web site I check for new stories from your list. The only thing I want to ask you to do is to write more stories. In order to keep readers you need to make sure you have at least one story every 4 weeks with a chapters addition every week to keep the interest of readers. But besides that you are number one in my mind I'll read more of the story later on this week since I have homework but please continue to write.

You have incredible talent! You made me cry, you made me feel the charachters pain! But most of all, you inspired me! I may include something of this sort in the novel I'm currently writing. Do you mind?

In the meantime,

Keep writing!

Wow, that was just great! I couldn't stop reading. Don't worry about asking for too many reviews. I do the same thing. Although I have to say you got a few more than fifteen _

this was so good i series so much

wow it's so interesting i just am so dumbfonded how you write. every detail just write and you end it at the right time.

you have got tho be the best fanfic writer ever. i read your unseen forces and now this. WOW!

i hope you write more stories in the future

Hey! It's been a while since I read this. I'm glad I finally got around to it. It was Great! I almost cried when Sora went to Joe's and did what she did. I was literally biting my collar the whole time! It's very wet. I think I need to wash it. Well, keep up the good work. I miss talking to you and hope you get on soon. Until next time, good-bye and I love you!

why aren't u rich yet? that was sooo kewl! but what dream are you talking about? i don't remember a dream where Tai was under a willow and died in sora's arms.

why did you make him do that? he should have punched her!

Whew! How could he? It gave me the chills! I've never loved someone as much as Tai loves Sora, but I would still NEVER cheat on anyone! That's completely wrong. And you were saying that Tai is a jerk, but you did write the story...Anyway, since you say it is going to get better, then it needed that to happen. It made the story very earth-shaking! By the way, it better get better or else... lol Laterz

Why can't we ask any questions? Can I ask questions? Well, I guess not! Anyway, I didn't think it sucked! I thought it was just fine. It's interesting to know that everyone loves Sora, too. I just want to know what happens at the party! I'm reading on now...ttyl laterz-Mike

That was great. Your a great writter. Anyways, this is just a suggestion. You should have made Sora and Kara have a catfight and Kara gets the f***ing s**t beat out of her. That was the best fic I ever read.