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| J.L. Dexter 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abuseA cute little one-shot,and completely Jack-centric. Much truth in Bill Turner's words, and not just in a story. =) Great job! |
| Johnnycakesdepp 2004-10-21 ch 1, | abuseI know I'm extremly late but this is a brilliant fic. |
| SpArRoWsWeNcH 2004-07-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was very powerful. I loved it. I know I'm a little late reviewing here, but I didn't want it to go unnoticed. I just purely loved it. Every line was amazing. Really. I'm not exaggerating in any way at all. "The sea rolls to the heartbeat of the earth, lad. Ye've but to listen to her, and she'll never lead ye wrong." Okay this line was just mere genious. It's really just beautiful and inspiring. "But mostly, for Jack, it meant you were your own man, with no one to stand in your way or take your credit. Your deeds were the only thing that affected you, and you could live or die by what you, and you alone, did." This just describes Jack perfectly and captures his character in a much deeper way then most authors on this site have created. You really did an unbelieveable job on this work of art. And I call it a work of art because that's what it is. It's just amazing. You dug into the soul of Jack Sparrow beautiuflly. Just beautifully. I can't get over it. You really have a great deal of talent. Thank you for giving me this fabulous experience of reading your story. -Jaimie |
| Daydreamer 2004-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow do you come up with this stuff? it is so good! please write more. ~Ks~ |
| JeanieBeanie33 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abuseA nice lil ficlet, if I do say so myself! |
| JessieRose 2003-11-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat writing!! |
| The GA Kid 2003-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it. |
| Cassandra Lunar 2003-10-16 ch 1, | abuse"The only rules that really matter are these: what a man can do and what a man can’t do" I really like this bit; I can imagine that this was what went through Jack's head during this scene, good work. |
| Alex 2003-10-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked it. it was short, but it was moving. good job! give yourself a pat on the back. |
| Estel la Rodeuse 2003-09-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is really beautiful.., and so jack like! I love the quote that you've put in the summary... It drawn me to your piece and I wasn't decieved.. it's really well written and full of light... Keep on writting... |
| Bou-chan 2003-09-13 ch 1, | abuseI like it... it's got Jack... it's good writing... no matter how you look at it its good... |