omg! ;-; this story is so cute!
I recognize a good story when I see (read) one! I loved the ending but plz tell me you'r going to add a sequel!
=D i can see rei being a proud mama/papa...lol

I must say I like this idea and it sounds interesting.

I know it's kinda late you finished this in 2004 but, are you going to do a sequel or something, because the story was really good. lol!

this was really good...i was wondering if there was a sequel or something if not, i think you should write a sequel...

SO EXTREMELY CUTE. I love it, this was just so extremely cute. Very intresting story.

Hey, what's going on? Why did Kai say to Rei, "Why didn't you tell me?"...
Good story *grins* its unique i can honestly say that i've never seen a story quite like this one. However you want to interpret that is your problem.

I'm a little bit confused.
Is that it? Is the mage dead that easily?
And what was with the weird glyth thing? Has Kai got some kind of secret power he doesn't know about or something?
Also what was it that Ray didn't tell Kai?
Are Tala and Bryan a couple now? I always assumed that they already were.
Oh well, i'm just a dumb non-blonde.
Update soon!

Dark Kaiser

Ooh, awesome!! I loved it!! Keep it up and have fun!! I'm dying for more!!

Take care,
Belle

its really good and i wanna read more chapters please!

O.O huh? the end confused me a bit...>> what did Rei not tell Kai? does that mean Tala and Brian are together now? or is there something else? is there going to be another chapter? is Rei going to have a baby? is that why Kai had his hand on his stomach? the mage was killed pretty easly is he really dead?! O.O if you want e-mail me im a little confused...

wow! i liked this so much that i refused to sleep, so now its 4:04 in the morning. but it was more than worth it! i oved this fic! you have great talent! keep up all the great work! laterz

Oh wow that last bit was so cute. And rei being prefnant is just too cute I love this. Well see ya around.

-squeals- such a unique and original idea! I luv it still! ^. ^ Hurry up and update already~

-c'ya~

...I love you...I read all 11 chaps and I abosoulutly LOVE EM! You have such a great talent! this fic should be published to THE WORLD! You are awsome and I'm not gonna deny it!

With lots of Love,
Angel Without Wings

I love it!! Uh that's all. Bye!
(I like exclaimation points so sue me!)