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This is a sterling example of why Mary Sues are so ridiculous.

Thank you so much for writing it.

Glory Be to Eru for his dose of medicine for Morgoth.

Varda's light of reason will shine on in my Favorites.

This. Is. Genius. :)

Oh, word... the first 25 Sues were annoying as anything, getting what they deserved, but Kitsune? Ugh, she couldn't even get some of her Japanese properly translated while speaking it! Otherwise, she would have known that "genki" is NOT "cute", as anyone else with a minimal knowledge of the language knows. Seven more Sues remain... I can't see any of them surviving long enough to permanently breach the canon, though ^^. They're all so Sueishly written, then bricked in the head (or whatever else kills the horrible things) with Reality.

* falls to the floor in a fit of giggles* I LOVED how you wrote Maedhros in this! I always liked him but... * sinker* this was just to much! I... really cant find the words to tell you how good you are!

Couldn't you have been nicer to Morgoth? I mean, I thought it a bit unfair.

But then again, that's just me.

Very funny, though! Excellent plot and spelling/grammar!

D&D

This story was hilarious. The basic premise would have been good enough, but the way you turn these seemingly idle comments about what's happening in the background into a plot by the end of the story is really neatly done. I love the thought of Maedhros and Morgoth--that was so random, it's perfect--and I think you've just cemented my position as a fully-fledged Maedhros fangirl. Your parodied Valar were also hilarious. If I ever write a parody, I think I might use some of your ideas if you odn't mind... they were inspiring. Gods this was hilarious. Loved your alliterative titles and your comments on Sues were spot-on.

You might want to separate your Author's Notes from the story a bit more. You don't put then in italics or anything so it's difficult to tell what's part of the story and wha'ts not. Just a bit of advice.

Oh, and this is more of a stylistic choice, but your Sue stories seemed to sound normal. No misspellings, correct grammar, punctuation, etc... this is a stylistic choice, as I don't want to have to read stories like that either, but it does make the stories seem a little un-Sue-ish.

Once again, thank you for entertaining me thisi afternoon xD

Man oh man oh man. You're twice, no ten times as awesome as is suggested here: /pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ptitleidkp0hmb6z6x

I love your fantasy rants, and I love this even more.

All hail Mary-sue killing reality!
The idea of the Protectors of the plot continuum is cool, but this is way more subtle.

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Erm...

Yes. I'm getting slightly fangirlish over you. How did you notice?

As I haven't read the Simarillion, I didn't understand all of it. But what I did understand, I liked.

Two Words: Epic Win

Wow... That was amazing!

Wow! I loved Morgoth in this story! I wonder why he's such a comedy hot spot...

Amazing! Brilliant! Absolutely hilarious!
I laughed so much while I read this.
Loved Feanor's "antics". And all the other characters you brought into play.
Even the Sues were lovely. To laugh about of course! :D
Poor, poor Morgoth. *rofl* This must be what they mean when saying "your sins come back to bite you". He certainly felt his sorely.

Very good work you did! I enjoyed every moment. And you definitely made my day!

And yes, as a end of review.
P.S.
The only thing that I didn't like is the ease of killing Sues. Elves aren't pasifists, true, and in older times some of them commited big atrocities but most of the Sues were teens. At least somebody from all those cases would try to heal them before killing.

The story had ended and it is sad. I would love to read more.

After reading the whole story I also got an impression that the author is somewhat mocking some Sue-types more subtitly in form of Feanor (God Mode), Glorfindel (All Atractive), Maedros, Nienna and others.

Morgoth got a lot of character and strangely, got my sympaties at the end too. Even with release all of those Sues* eternety like that is too harsh. He at least deserved some hope.

Other then this, a good manual of "Sues and how to fight them"

*And he used his most powerful Sues on game anyway, so only weak leftovers had left in that box.