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| Melylott S. Banks 2003-11-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is just lovely. You capture those carefree, nostalgic childhood moments perfectly. I could practically see the fireflies and sunset, and feel the cool evening breeze. You have a lot of talent, keep up the LOTR writing. I'm honored to have you in our ranks. *salutes* ;) -Mel |
| ElveNDestiNy 2003-09-22 ch 1, | abusePaladin. Lol, I love the name Paladin ~ one of the fallen angels... Okay, that was besides the point =) Anyway, your story seems to be off on a very good start. I hope you continue this! ~ ElveNDestiNy |
| shirebound 2003-09-14 ch 1, | abuseAiko-chan, you're writing LOTR fanfiction! Woohoo! And this is so wonderful. What a sweet, loving, adorable story. Especially- "A thick lump formed in Paladin's throat just then: at the beauty of the evening, the preciousness of this moment with his darling lass, the hope and life that shone from her eyes." Sigh. I'm *so* glad to hear that you have more ideas for young hobbit stories. Can't wait. |