;_; so cute. I loved this fic! I was worried for a bit that Fye was about to say something like "his belief in Ashura's love made the love real" but then he didn't and I was so happy. :D I like how you imitated CLAMP's style, it gave the entire story a different feel to it. "...that your happiness overrides all" that part really struck me as something CLAMP would write, or at least how one of the Western publishers would translate it. Kinda awkward-sounding but technically right, and with a bit of insightful fortune-cookie ring to it.

Great job, I love Kurogane/Faye and I hope you write more.

Thanks for posting!

SJM

I like this fic. Apart from all my favourite CLAMP characters and couples showing up, I think you have a good supporting plot with sound side stories. Nicely written and I do agree that belief (when one is happy), goes a long way.

Wow!! That was one of the most saddest and happiest KuroFay fics I've read! I really like your plot and that you used other CLAMP characters in the story!! I hope you continue to write more KuroFay fics because I think you are an awsome writer! Keep up the good work! ^-^

I loved it!! It was really good!! You're a good writer.

I am definitely going to favorite this story. Although some parts were a bit too corny for me (like the ending) I loved it anyway. Because inside ALL of us is a being that craves for flufiness and, yes, true love. What I really liked about this entire story was the way you wove some of Clamp's other characters into it. I was really disappointed that the two characters from Wish didn't make an appearance, as I am completely infatuated with the manga (and it's only four volumes long!). However, I can definitely guess who the gardener is. Is the movie "Hisui" also a reference to Wish? Oh, I have a question: you probably meant Kohaku and Shuichiro from Wish, right? Although if it was Hisui and Kokuyo, and you had actually added them in, I would have squealed. Really, really loudly. Because I love those two. And they seem to fit in with "love at first sight," which seemed to be the theme for all your other couples! Before I forget to add this (because I'm rambling on and on) Chii and Hideki's story is the one that touched me the most. I haven't read Chobits, but Hideki seems adorable. So does Chii. Rikuo and Kazahaya's relationship was vaguely depressing, but so intense. It struck me in a different way from Chii/Hideki and Syaoran/Sakura (who are also very cute). It was more adult, I guess, less cutesy. I won't say anything else or I'll end up repeating the word "intense." I love Saiga too. I love Saiga and Kakei. They're great together (...not quite in THAT way). The reason Gohou Drug doesn't seem to have much substance is because it hasn't gotten any further than three volumes (to date). Which is such a pity, because it's hilarious and sexy. And finally (I probably have a lot more to say, but since I didn't keep track of all my thoughts, I've most likely forgotten them) Kurogane and Fai are meant to be. They are opposites, and as Tsubasa unfolds that becomes more apparent. And, as we all know, opposites attract. (Take Hisui and Kokuyo, for instance).

Liem

Side note: I loved Yuuko and Watanuki's cameo. ^^

I have nothing intelligent to say, but my mind is shouting "lovelovelove" and squealing happily over this story. It's very cute. Thank you for writing it!

ACK! I think I sent a "report possible abuse" message by accident! *cries* I was trying to add this fic my my favorites list...this is DarkAngelShinigami, by the way...very sorry if the message got sent...T_T SORRY!

PS: This is fic GOOD! too bad there's no sequel...or if there is, I havent read it yet...^_^

That was SO cute! I LOVE THIS STORY! It filled the gaps of my heart! It's what I've been searching in a Tsubasa fics for many days! Thank you so much for writing such a refreshing and loving story! ^__^

This was awesome. Truly, awesome. I loved the wording, the creativity, everything. ^_^

The most impressive thing of all, I think, is that it was written in the style of CLAMP. It seems like it would become something they had written themselves. That is something very hard to achieve, I think. ^_^

i love it!! stupid ashura!! poor fye but yay for getting kurogane!! and yay other pairings!!

kawaii! one of the cutest fics i've ever read, i love it! :3

OMG! SO CUTE! YAY!

KAWAII! Oh, I love it!

WAH.

*sobs*

That was so sad and then so sweet that I-

*breaks down and sobs in a corner* Kyah! I needed that! Wow, thank you! I have got to say I have had the worst week in my entire life, and stumbling across your fanfic has definatly made it better! It's so well done and wonderfully written... AND YOU INCLUDED LEGAL DRUG AND XHOLIC! 3

OMG. -dies- Fluffyness! Kya~

^-^ A very sweet fic with a fast moving plot and enough fluff to satisfy hundreds of fluff-less people. I'm glad I found it. ^-^

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