this was a really cool story!

I have been remiss in reviewing this story. Brief but beautifully written. :)

Your descriptions of their obvious love for one another, the expressions on their faces, the gentle caresses...

Sigh...

When were you going to write more of these lovely shorts? Tomorrow, you say...? ;)

Cheers!
Mouse :)

Aw! Cuteness.

I would say more, but it's four in the morning. I'll be back to review something else later (after sleep) to make up for this.

:)

You've left me speechless, but warm and fuzzy inside. :-)

PERFECT! BEAUTIFUL!
"They lay together in darkness, letting the shadows be their blanket, and letting the moon be their light" -> Oh God, what else could I say...

There have been lots of wedding stories and first time together stories written, but I think you've captured a perfect m/l moment. Love the way you've captured Max and Logan's conversation pattern, finishing each other's sentences and repeating each other's thoughts. Great job.

Loved it, nice work.

That was so sweet and so cute! It brought a smile to my face, and God knows how much I needed it. Thanks.

very very nice, nice touch, simple just nice...thanks for sharing

Thank you... :-)

Another wonderful ficlet from the mind of Denise...

Now all I need is some PL and the more fic... and well... more fic... and i'll be forever happy.

OOh, nice. See what all that Mountain Dew'll do to you!

You made me sniffle. Darn it! (Just kidding) Very sweet, very simple, a nice little moment. Thanks for sharing.

Hee! So you kind of fulfilled the request and kind of skirted around it. ;) No complaints from me, though. I enjoyed this.

Heh...I noticed that joke about his eyes too...

What a beautiful, moving moment in time. Thankyou for that.