Just found this story.

Excellent, your style is tight and yet very fluid. I can see the images you spell out clearly. I have only one complaint and it is a complaint I have even with professional writers. When your characters make their way do they use a hammer and nails or do they pour cement. A person can stumble, tumble, slink, trip, tiptoe, run, spin and even barrel roll whem they move from one place to another. Making their way is non descriptive and easy trap to fall into. Just a pet peeve.

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Another excellent story from you! I loved the dialouge in this the most!

I love it! poor psycho sands I love him so dearly I feel bad for El having to deal with his **! he lol

This was a nice read. I enjoyed it imensly.
Thanks for writting it, mate. See ya around.

The banter at the end was amusing. This was well written.

Um...idiot! what does he expect when he goes into a fking house on his own? right, you'd get shot because what goes up must go down and the ** always hits the fan.

Gee, I gotta use that line sometime. I think it sounds great.

Ah, poor Sheldon. That makes a hell of a lot more sence than the three mugger guys who werent muggers.

I can happily tell you that I do not know much about guitars. First, my Dad happens to be a guitarist and he's pretty good. He teaches sometimes. But, I am sure he'd kill me if I tried anything that included a bullet, strings an frets.

Clever idea using that song. I know Johnny does a lot of music. He even came up with the Sands theme in OUATIM. Rodriguez asked everyone to come up with a theme or something for their characters. Anyway, good update.

I think Johnny came up with it when they were filming. I'll have to watch the comentary on that to make sure though.
I hate the first movie to this series because its in spanish and I'd rather not spend my time trying to read the line so fast that I have no clue what's going on because they've all ready moved on.
I think IMD would have that sort of information though.
Good thing keeping it off camera, it would have made things odd.

Ha, how cute. I love these two.

I guess Sands still has to wait for the "Oportune moment"
I do hope that was the POTC reference you were refering too. It was such a little one that I think I passed it by the first time I read this. I had to go back to find it. I hate it when someone challenges me and I can't deliver!

I alugh in El's general direction for useing a cliched beginning!
*lol* this was amusing.

I know you finished this long ago. But I love slashyness! yay!

Ah, okay. That is an interesting idea. El has a sucide mission planned. That's for sure.

Fantastic read. I really hope you will continue to write more ouatim fic in the future.

Also...could you send me the slash version of chap 9? It'd be much appreciated!