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The Red Stiletto
2008-08-29
ch 13,
abuseAnother excellent story from you! I loved the dialouge in this the most!
XxSupernatural.lovexX
2008-08-18
ch 6,
abuseI love it! poor psycho sands I love him so dearly I feel bad for El having to deal with his **! he lol
Professor Know-it-all
2008-05-28
ch 13,
abuseThis was a nice read. I enjoyed it imensly.
Thanks for writting it, mate. See ya around.
Professor Know-it-all
2008-05-28
ch 12,
abuseThe banter at the end was amusing. This was well written.
Professor Know-it-all
2008-05-28
ch 11,
abuseUm...idiot! what does he expect when he goes into a fking house on his own? right, you'd get shot because what goes up must go down and the ** always hits the fan.

Gee, I gotta use that line sometime. I think it sounds great.
Professor Know-it-all
2008-05-28
ch 10,
abuseAh, poor Sheldon. That makes a hell of a lot more sence than the three mugger guys who werent muggers.
Professor Know-it-all
2008-05-28
ch 9,
abuseI can happily tell you that I do not know much about guitars. First, my Dad happens to be a guitarist and he's pretty good. He teaches sometimes. But, I am sure he'd kill me if I tried anything that included a bullet, strings an frets.

Clever idea using that song. I know Johnny does a lot of music. He even came up with the Sands theme in OUATIM. Rodriguez asked everyone to come up with a theme or something for their characters. Anyway, good update.
Professor Know-it-all
2008-05-28
ch 8,
abuseI think Johnny came up with it when they were filming. I'll have to watch the comentary on that to make sure though.
I hate the first movie to this series because its in spanish and I'd rather not spend my time trying to read the line so fast that I have no clue what's going on because they've all ready moved on.
I think IMD would have that sort of information though.
Good thing keeping it off camera, it would have made things odd.
Professor Know-it-all
2008-05-28
ch 6,
abuseHa, how cute. I love these two.
Professor Know-it-all
2008-05-28
ch 5,
abuseI guess Sands still has to wait for the "Oportune moment"
I do hope that was the POTC reference you were refering too. It was such a little one that I think I passed it by the first time I read this. I had to go back to find it. I hate it when someone challenges me and I can't deliver!
Professor Know-it-all
2008-05-28
ch 4,
abuseI alugh in El's general direction for useing a cliched beginning!
*lol* this was amusing.
Professor Know-it-all
2008-05-28
ch 3,
abuseI know you finished this long ago. But I love slashyness! yay!
Professor Know-it-all
2008-05-28
ch 2,
abuseAh, okay. That is an interesting idea. El has a sucide mission planned. That's for sure.
Tryem Loir
2006-08-16
ch 13, anon.
abuseFantastic read. I really hope you will continue to write more ouatim fic in the future.

Also...could you send me the slash version of chap 9? It'd be much appreciated!
Tryem Loir
2006-08-16
ch 2, anon.
abuseThis is some seriously brilliant work. I've read and re-read it many times and it never gets old. In fact it was this fic that brought me into the ouatim fandom to begin with so I really must congratulate you for that!
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