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Cuteandsweet
2009-09-04 . chapter 10
aww this was soo cute! can you please write more mokuba and seto flufflyness? I LOVE BROTHERLY FLUFFY!
Yukikaima
2004-07-31 . chapter 10
Meh, here I go again--my evil habit of NOT BEING ABLE TO STOP TO JUST GIVE A BLOODY REVIEW.

Gomen. I'll try better next time, but honestly, I was enjoying the fluff too much. X_X

Hehe, not only did you manage to put some angst in there for flavour, but I had a lot of fun reading through it. Yeah, some grammar errors here and there, but meh, that's more than forgivable for something *DECENT* to read around here.

*looks around* Really.

Ugh, and this is a short review for that many chapters. Gomen. I'm bread at the moment. X_X I should be sleeping.
KonekoTsuki
2004-05-12 . chapter 10
*sniff* That was so sweet. Way to go Mamono! I love your Seto & Mokuba fics so much^_^
brbnap
2004-03-28 . chapter 10
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Sapphire and Gold
2004-02-10 . chapter 1
Adding stuff to fav list!
Just this once
2004-02-01 . chapter 10
I love your stories!
Seto's opened up...and shows hints that he likes Téa!
If you write a sequel (which I hope you do), can you involve seto/téa romance it it?
Flower Petals
2003-12-31 . chapter 10
That was so. . .beautiful! What a wonderful ending, to this fantastic, incredible, amazing, jaw-dropping good story! I loved it to pieces! (Boy, that was a wierd line. . .)
It ended so beautifully, and the way you described playing the violin was just so beatiful. It was beautiful! Beautiful!
I'm glad I got a chance to read this masterpiece!
Oh, and thank you so much for reviewing my fic!
Flower Petals
2003-12-30 . chapter 8
What a incredible chapter! Poor K-man though. . .Ohmegosh! Did I just write what I thought I wrote? It contagious I guess. . .
Kaiba got shot! But he better save Mokey anyway! Can't wait until the next chapter, unfortunately, I'm not supposed to be on the internet, so I haveda go!
Flower Petals
2003-12-29 . chapter 7
*teary eyed* what a cute fluffy chapter!
The way you write is so wonderful and when you had Seto warning Mokey to be careful and not to fall and when Mokey said, "I know you'll always come to pick me up if I do," I started getting all bleary eyed!
WHO DARES INTERRUPT THIS FLUFFY STORY! WHO IS THIS MYSTERIOUS CHARACTER! HE BETTER NOT HURT SETO OR MOKEY!
Whew, glad I got that out of my system!
Oh, and I can't believe you called Kaiba K-man. Seriously, I'm freaked out!
Well, anyway sorry for this late and long review, and I'll read another chapter whenever I get the chance!
Flower Petals
2003-12-27 . chapter 6
Hey Mamono, I think I've found my favorite quote now! Insanity is simply rational thinking for the deranged. That's such a cool line!
Another beautifully written chapter! They just keep getting better! I would read more, but I gotta run, (well rather, ride in a car to go grocery shopping at Walmart) but excellent job!
Flower Petals
2003-12-26 . chapter 5
Hey Mamono, it's Flower Petals!
Okay, I'm not really the sappy type, but. . .that was so touching! *eyes watering with tears* It was so cute and sappy and I-I almost cried! *eyes get even bigger and rounder and wetter* tragedy coming up? I don't think I can handle it!
Oh! And thanks for reviewing my fics. I appreciate it so much!
Flower Petals
2003-12-24 . chapter 4
Sorry Mamono, I would have logged in, but I didn't have time! In fact, I really didn't have time to read this chapter, but I did anyway because I love your story so much! What a wonderful, incredible chapter! And interesting, Kaiba plays the violin. I do too, so it's always fun reading fics that have violin playing in them! This chapter was so beautiful and meaningful, well done!
Oh, and I'm sorry, I know I should have done this sooner, but here's a reply to the review you submitted to Tale of Shadows Chapter 1:
Gut durchgebraten! Sprechen sie Deutsch? Ich verstehe Deutsch, aber ich spreche es sehr schlecht. . .
Gee, I hope I wrote that correctly! I'm a little rusty. . .^_^ Anygohoobles, I'll read more whenever I have the chance!
Flower Petals
2003-12-23 . chapter 3
Wow, what an awesome chapter! I love how you had Seto hide his feelings in "the walls of ice". . .Just about everything in that chapter was meaningful and so well written! Sorry, I'd write tons more, but it's past my bedtime, so I'll settle for writing this: This is story is wonderful!
Flower Petals
2003-12-21 . chapter 2
Hey Mamono! It's Flower Petals.
Thank you so much for reviewing my fic, it's really hard to get people to read it because it's so long. I'm glad you liked it!
Anygohoobles, this chapter was another wonderful one! You portray the true Kaiba so well, (I find that a lot of fics just don't do him justice; you should read this one where he's wearing blue fuzzy slippers. . .^_^). You write so beautifully, I'll read more as soon as I can!
Flower Petals
2003-12-20 . chapter 1
Hya Mamono! It's Flower Petals. . .
Sorry, I'm only able to read the first chapter today. But after seeing how good it was, I can barely stop myself from reading more!
Kaiba has never been one of my favorite characters, but the way you have portrayed him in this fic, makes me understand him a little bit more.
I really admire the way you write, and your other fan fiction "Silver and Gold" is just spectacular, as I'm sure this one is. I'm putting you on my favorite list as soon as I stop rambling and press the darn "Put Author on Favorite List" key!
I'll read more later!
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