please update soon, a little repetitive at times, but still it's fabulous! update soon!

Ack!! More! I need more!

This was fantastic. I love the new, "mean" Syd. And Vaughn was note-perfect. Not too tough, but not lacking the cajones that he seemed to have lost on the actual show.

Update soon, please!

this is very good. slightly insane, but very good,and well written. please continue it.
Cheers,
~Terin:)

oh, another chapter!! how happy am I??!! it was SO good!
"SWF, criminal, seeks SWM, government agent, for blackmail, treason, death threats, possible lifelong relationship. No sanity required, emotional baggage a necessity." -> lmao! hahaha. that was great.
""I'll see you Tuesday," she says, softly, dimples denting her cheeks as she smiles." -> oh, goody, she's taking a deal!! I'm so glad. :-)
I can't wait for more of this story! its so good!!

omg! i've just found your story, and i thought it was simply amazing! it's just so well written and, well, really good!! lol!
anyway, i can't wait to read more!

Hello! ok, I have to tell you this but I have no idea of how it will come out 'cause I'm not that fluent in English... So please, be patient ;-)
So, here it is: your fiction is totally wonderful...really, one of the best I ever read (was that that bad?). I love badSyd..she's so cool and love twistedVaughn. too.. Can't he be more adorable?
And te kiss was so unexpected and perfect... Good move!
You really did a good job and I just hope you will keep it goin'on.
Besides I think some explanations are dued. First of all: why has Sydney left and more important: when?.. And what about Lauren? Did she really leave Vaughn? I mean... in your fiction, is she a bad guy or what? Cause I was thinking about Sark turnin' her in to get immunity... Ok...my mind sometimes gets really weird... but I can't help it and writing fiction myself doesn't help much neither!
And, yes, I was forgetting about how much I love Agent Sark.. !
Anyway, I know you'll answer all this questions... I just hope you'll update soon (this sentence is not quite grammatically correct, is it? ...Again my speaking italian the whole time!)
Bye then and keep on writing!
Nev

Great chapter. I haven't reviewed before (or at least I don't think I have), so I'm doing that now. I love the whole concept of this story, and how Sydney won't turn on her parents. Good stuff. I can't wait for more.

lol, all that coffee sounds like me! :-P I'm addicted myself, I'm not an insomniac, though.
I loved the repitition of 'put the gun down, vaughn.' lol. and the whole scene where Sydney was trying to get him to leave his life? man. that was so good!!
'YES.' yay. :-) lol. this was a great chapter! I can't wait for more.

I really love your story. You're an absolute great writer. Please continue soon. I can't wait for more.

You updated! Fantastic chapter...Sydney's reaction to Vaughn's answer was great. Please update again as soon as you can!

This story is great, love Sydney as a rogue agent. Love the games between her and Vaughn. Can't wait to see more.

:-) great chapter! she'll accept a deal! hooray. this was REALLY good! I love your style of writing, seriously, it's just terrific! I can't wait for more!

this is a fantastic story!! the conversation between them is very witty, up to the same level of intelligence & chemistry that is actually on the show. I can't wait to read more of this!

finally an update! i reallie like it!

finally an update! i reallie like it!