That was kind of confusing but it was also sad. I like it though.

very sad story but good jobb i btw i love that song.

i'm sorry but that is stupid because we know louis isn't perfect and that just ripped off the song!

oh dear...not Louis to...wut r u killing all my fave characters?...thats sad n i luv that song, actually i love all simple plan songs, it was a good story keep writtrn
-Lolly

*sniffs* That was so sad. I had a few problems working out which lines were part of the fic and which were from the song, but I managed to get through that. I wouldn't object to a continuation, it would be nice to see what happens to Louis from this point on. Or more likely, how his family and friends would react to his death.

Good work.

This reminds me of my father. I love that simple plan song, the cd is good and that's the one i listen to 24/7