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| 200meters 2006-08-03 ch 1, anon. | abusethis was the first poem I've read on this site that actually made sense and had a real rhythm. Great work! |
| Lee Gallagher 2004-11-06 ch 8,  | abuseGood poems, I liked the first Crowley, War's and Pestilence's the best, they were all pretty good though. |
| My 2004-08-11 ch 8, anon. | abuseHehe, this is good. |
| My 2004-08-11 ch 5, anon. | abuseI like this! |
| My 2004-08-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseHey! this is cool, you made it sound just like him! keep it up. |
| Eagle Lord 2004-06-14 ch 8, | abuseNext you should do . . . I don't care about any of the other characters. Anyway, great poem. I'm not sure it was supposed to be funny, but I found it so. I liked (da da da!) the third stanza best. Surprising, huh? The whole thing was equal. He whines too much. Well, write someone else. Dunno. |
| Miss Hollow 2004-05-28 ch 8, | abuse! Pestilence poetry! That was sweet. (Except not, given the attitude of the whole thing...) Lovely job, and thanks muchly. |
| WargishBoromirFan 2004-03-23 ch 1, | abuseSweet. AngelDemon's my favorite, but all of these are really cool. And that line from Death's - "They tell themselves that they are good, and yet they look for hell" - I love it. *Shudder* I'll give another vote for Pepper's POV, but an Agnes Nutter'd be nice, too. You are an awesome poet, man. |
| Miss Hollow 2004-02-03 ch 7, | abuse...Intriguing. I like it. (also, yay!) |
| Eagle Lord 2004-01-18 ch 7, | abuseOOh, my eyes! I love this! The thing, not the last stanza! Is he upset that people don't like him, or just saying that it's weird? I haven't read those disc world books, so I don't know as much about Death as you do. This was wary good. Who are you doing next? |
| Zela 2003-12-28 ch 6, anon. | abuse:( I Nearly missed this one!! Ah! ... Obviously I didn't, but I nearly did! I don't like this one as much as your others, but then, I don't like Pollution as much as the others. He always comes across as - flat. Kind've without personality. Even DEATH has personality! Even so. However, you've done well with something most wouldn't attempt, even though you obviously don't like the subject matter. Fave line: No end. But there was a beginning. |
| Miss Hollow 2003-12-22 ch 6, | abuseBrr. Creepy poem here. I like it. I like all of these, actually. And I'm seconding the request for one from Pestilence's POV - part of the fun is only having a sentence's worth of canon to draw from. |
| Eagle Lord 2003-12-22 ch 6, | abuseThis was very creepy and cool. I'm not sure I understood it, but that's ok. Maybe we weren't supposed to. I like the way it's split into two parts. I love Lution. He's cool. And mine. Well, anywho, I'm not reviewing the new chapter in "Sephiroth's Song" until you say the tune. I got an author alert for that twice. Weird. Did you upload it twice? |
| Wierd Kitty 2003-12-22 ch 6, anon. | abuseOh yeah, I meant to mention this before, but PLEZE write a Zira poem. Zira's cool. |
| Wierd Kitty 2003-12-22 ch 6, anon. | abuseYour Lution poem is... interestring. And I mean that in the best possible way. Well, maybe not best. But a pretty darn good possible way, though I can't make incredibly much sense of it. On AngelDemon (the poem, I mean) the line "Angel, angel, hold my hand" sounds like part of a jump-rope rhyme thingy. But that's a good thing. Or at least a thing. An interesting thing. What would a Newt poem be like? Or go for the really wierd, do a poem from the Bentley's point of view! |