This is... really cheesey...

The beginning was description packed, I like how you did that. I could feel the heartwrenching feeling that Relena was experiencing.

So she was speaking the song? I thought that was very unique and really did something great for this piece. At first it caught me off guard, but my confusion cleared up ^_^

All in all, nice work. I hope to read more from you in the future. Keep writing!!

Jess 0:o)