Good start. Write more soon,

Hey!
I know I already reviewed on Portkey but I thought I'd reveiew here too!This is really great you should keep going its really good hope to read more soon then!
Ciao for now,
Baby Bunnie

Sorry, that did suck. That was undoubtedly the worst "story" I've ever had the misfortune to lay eyes on. Did you even read the books?
Why? Why did you butcher Hermione like that? Do you take some perverse pleasure in completely ruining a perfectly good character? Do you?
I must ask you, what on earth possessed you to put that horrible piece of garbage on a public site?