 lrigD 2008-07-06 . chapter 5Ok, I know you've started this story 4 years ago, but please continue! It's so interesting to see what became of them, and you for one didn't go with Scott married Shelby or Auggie married Jules, which I really liked. So please! Update! |
 zoog433 2008-05-08 . chapter 5that was cool except one thing... where's Kat (Katherine)? other than that i hope there's another chapter! |
 Aimed mischief 2005-06-27 . chapter 5Wow, this is really good, I like it! Keep it up and have fun! |
 Ghostwriter 2005-02-28 . chapter 5This is good. You should definitely write more. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 Silence-endlessecho 2005-02-08 . chapter 5This is really great. You know how to tell a story, a bit at a time. It isn't rushed, but keeps a good flow and pace. And is very interesting. I can't wait to read more! |
 Sweet Chica 2004-07-20 . chapter 1 I miss this story. |
 veruca 2004-04-19 . chapter 5 This is a good story, I really want to know what happens. |
 Jessica 2004-04-18 . chapter 5 Great story review a.s.a.p we are all waiting hurry up! |
 Denise 2004-04-17 . chapter 5 Wowzers! This story is so great! I totally love it and you capture the characters so well. Please update soon. Oh and i love the couples interaction... love it! |
 Lynn 2004-04-16 . chapter 5 Okay I love this story! I hope you get Scott and Shelby together they are so right for each other. Update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Anon 2004-04-13 . chapter 5 You've got the basis of a really good HG fic here. One of the best I've seen in a while, but I think it needs work.
Do you have a beta? If not, I'd definitely look into it.
A lot of the problems are just grammatical, and spacing. But you could do with some further plot development too.
But don't give up, I'm really likeing this story. :) |
 alyssa 2004-04-12 . chapter 5 This is a good story. But why did Scott move on if he really loved Shelby? Will they get back 2gether? Update soon don't leave me hanging! |
 SeptemberBaby 2004-04-10 . chapter 5This is a great story. I can't wait for you to update. I love this story. Update again soon. |
 Sweet Chica 2004-04-09 . chapter 5 I adore this story. Its written really well, and you captured the characters' personalities perfectly. I can't wait for you to update! |
 Lynn 2004-04-07 . chapter 5 This is a cool story hope ya update soon will scott and shelby get together in this fic? |