Very nice, if a little sad, story. I can really imagine this happening during that Duel. I liked how you depicted the Monsters' loyalty to their masters, and the kind-of-friendship they have... and that they don't like Pegasus. That were a few great comments.

I enjoyed reading this. *faves*

Lolchen

Well done.

Interesting take, impressive.

I think this was incredible. A Good take of the feeligns of characters who normally go unnoticed. You did a great job of this. Easily as good as your CSI Crossover. Well done.

um, yeah...cool. that's just cool...you should do a series of stories of the goings-on in the Graveyard for different duels. like the Yugi/Joey duel in Battle City. these stories, from the Monsters points of view are real good...keep 'em coming!

::nods:: it was nice. i liked it. but maybe i'm biased. heh. i like all of your works. keep 'em coming bro.

certainly a unique point of view-not many do the monsters pov. Good form, good spelling, and everything.

Nice, but then again, I've come to expect that from you by now. Congrats on a job well done.

Excellnt! I love stories involving the Monsters themselves and this was wonderfully written to boot! Maybe youcould do a series like this? I know they'd have a chance to chat during the Battle City arc...

Oh, before I forget... *does first review dance*

I really like this fanfic. It's very descriptive, and the bit about the monsters secretly wanting to attack Pegasus was a nice touch. This, I think, is how the whole "monsters with feelings" bit should be written.

Wow... it's a beautiful story... I like it a lot. *nods* Beautiful.. maybe you could write another chapter for this about how the monsters feel to be used against their master by Relinquished... That would be an interesting thing... *sighs* Time to go again.. See ya! Write more! I love your style!