i think ur story is well thought out but i also think u should add some premenitions from bardock it would make it more realistic since he was able to see the future but the story was very good.

This is a real good start, i just wanna know what happens next. I have always wondered about Bardock surviving Vegeta's destruction, as well as if he met his son.

I loved it.Bardock's my favorite charater.Please write more chapters.I want to see what happens.PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS.

hey! wake up from your eternal sleep _/ pleasee continue _

It's a good story please continue:)

i luv it please continue i am looking forward to new chapters. i luvvvv it

Um, I see this was written more than a half a year ago... why aren't you still doing it? I think you should finish this fic. It's gotten a great start. Please finish it!

good write more

I liked the story alot so far. I really hope you continue this story.

great story! continute!

I really like bardock .also I just saw the bardock mpovie in english(i've already seen it japanese) so I really think he's cool . and this fic sounds really interesting and I hope you continue it and get the next part out soon !

this has a different twist to what i've gotten used to seeing. More?

Please continue!

Keep writing! I wanna see how Goku will react when he finds his father!

MORE! MORE! AAAAAHHHHHH! PLEASE!