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| dean'sdreamingangel 2007-06-28 ch 12,  | abuseI lovey yur story. i liked how u ended it with doyle. |
| MistressDarkness 2004-03-06 ch 12, | abusethat was great! i luved it! especially doyle at the end...:D |
| Christine Thunder 2003-12-30 ch 11, anon. | abuseTruly amazing and sweet now why can Mr Joss Weldon realize that Cordelia and Angel are star crossed lovers and now Buffy and Angel I truly loved reading your story and it insightful, sad and inspiring. It goes to show true love wins out in the end and I think A Sunnydale Tale is one of the best fan fictions I have read in a long time thanks for your talent and insight into what most fans want and that is Cordy and Angel togather thanks again |
| Faith 2003-09-23 ch 12, anon. | abusegreat story! i loved it!! :) |
| PsychoticNetJunkie 2003-09-22 ch 12, | abuseThis is an excellent story! Although you probably shouldn't have put all the chapters up, if you prolong it a bit people will review pleading for you to continue... Well anyway I loved this story, and a plus is that there was hardly any mistakes! Dibs to you! Well once again great story! PsychoticNetJunkie |
| Diana Troy 2003-09-19 ch 12, | abuseAw that ending was perfect. :) Great job, continue to write! |
| Diana Troy 2003-09-19 ch 6, | abuseDude the dad was such a punk... I don't really buy his reaction, though... it was way too old school Knights of the Round Table days, for me with the whole "the investors want you pure..." Yeah, sorry didn't like that at all. But the vampire scene was well-done, the Angel/Cordy banter is getting more comfortable. Nice progression. |
| Diana Troy 2003-09-19 ch 4, | abuseReally like the dialogue in this chapter... this really is a heartwarming story. Hope you don't mind me leaving reviews chapter by chapter. |
| Diana Troy 2003-09-19 ch 2, | abuseHmm... Angel's kinda out of character, here... but the Cordelia... I think I could see this version of her as believable considering all that's happened to her in that season of the show. You've got a couple grammar/spelling/word choice errors... maybe try to find a beta reader? Other than that, the story so far has been compelling, I like it. |
| Talia Moon 2003-09-18 ch 12, | abusei just read this story in one and all i have to say is that this is a great story. poor cordy she went through hell. the a/c twist rocked by the way. doyle rules! TM |
| JMJ 2003-09-18 ch 12, anon. | abuseCool fic. |
| Si.Crazy 2003-09-17 ch 12, | abuseGreat fic! I just loved it all! ;) |
| vartanluvva 2003-09-17 ch 12, | abuseNice story, love the A/C twist, but I have to know...is that the end or are you going to continue? Personally I thought it was a great ending (if thats it), but on the oter hand I wouuld really like to read more. But back to my main point...love the story, keep up work like this and I will always read your work. Michelle |