 Rhyannon 2004-09-09 . chapter 4AH! POOR LORD-HIKO-SAMA I HOPE I HAS A HAPPY ENDING WITH DA GIRL OF HIS DREAMS UPDATE REAL SOON PLEASE! |
 chimmoku 2004-01-18 . chapter 1heh...hey! I'm glad I finally found your fics (had to have alisha tell me your pen name) you're fic is really good! so now i'm going to read the next chapter...well...actually i'm going to go to sleep...oh bye the way...this is nikki! ^_^ |
 KewlKitty 2004-01-08 . chapter 1What block are you in? Mr. Duvall Rocks(Silver), he barely ever gives homework ^_^. Anyway, great job! See you on da bus! ^_^ |
 Bob-san 2004-01-04 . chapter 4AAH! where's tsubame!?! WE MEED TSUBAME and i thought that it was Okon and her sis who likes Hiko... [Sighs] |
 Master of Time and Space 2004-01-03 . chapter 4~THAT~! Is the most shocking thing i have ever heard: Hiko in love. Still, it was fun and somewhat fluffy, i suppose. not much, but some. Personally, i think that being caught in the typhoon has the makings of a "blanket" scenario. U know what that means, right. if so good. if not, well too bad for you. ^__^ *dies for like the millionth time in one night* |
 Master of Time and Space 2004-01-03 . chapter 3O_O *breathing heavily* *heart attack* *dies* WHAT IN THE BLOODY HELL?!?!?? Saitou is a teacher? TO ALL OF THEM! That is just messed up ~BIG~ time!! And the Broom-head too? i really feel sorry for kenshin and his friends. ... maybe just a bit for the others. |
 Master of Time and Space 2004-01-03 . chapter 2O_O Hiko is in the present as well? The world as we know it has come to an end. But what of Megumi, Sano, and Yahiko? Will they ever come back as well?? I hope so, 'cuz without em, life isn't the same. Big surprise for the sword forger, eh?? |
 Master of Time and Space 2004-01-03 . chapter 1Hm... good and funny, with much furriness. Though, i would expect more details and a little slower pace. More interesting, ne? |
 Hydra-Star 2004-01-03 . chapter 4YAY!! YOU UPDATED! *Hydra-Star begins to jump around in chibi form and everyone prepares for another crazy review* THIS HAS BEEN THE HIGHLIGHT OF MY DAY! No, seriously. Today has been incredibly boring for me. We had this stupid (not to mention pointless) party where I had to take care of the little kids. For full details of me complaining about that, see my live journal at http://w.livejournal.com~hydra_star Yeah, like you’d really want to.
But anyway, YOU TOOK WAY TO LONG TO UPDATE! I KNOW THAT IT DOESN'T TAKE YOU THIS LONG TO WRITE A CHAPTER! WHEN YOU WERE WRITING “Light and Shadow Love”, UPDATES WERE MUCH MORE OFTEN! I REALLY LIKED THAT! WHY HAVE YOU STOPPED! SURE, YOU’RE DEPRESSED, BUT YOU CAN STILL WRITE! I WOULD THINK THAT WRITING SOMETHING LIKE THIS WOULD GET YOU OUT OF DEPRESSION SO YOU’D WRITE EVEN MORE! Jeeze... You are so hopeless.
Anyway, back to your story. Although you took way to long to update, I’m afraid that I’ll have to forgive you. If you had updated earlier, I would have read it then and I wouldn’t have been cheered up by this. This chapter is hilarious! I loved it! And the way that you did Hiko was great! Keep it up! I would rant more, but I’m afraid that I must go now. Update soon, or else. *Music: Bom Bom Bom*
Hydra-Star |
 ewunia 2004-01-03 . chapter 4Great fic. I love it. You could make chapters a little longer and more ideas. Poor Hiko never was in love. So please continue. |
 ixchen 2003-12-11 . chapter 3i love it.. i can't wait to see what happens |
 Hydra-Star 2003-12-01 . chapter 3YAY! YOU UPDATED! *Gives Jiro Hikari about 50 boxes of pocky in celebration* YIPPEE! *Dances around the room like the manic she is throwing streamers everywhere that conveniently appeared out of mid air for her*
Jiro Hikari: Um... Hydra-Star... That’s enough don’t you think...
Come to think of it... WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG??!! WELL??!! I DON’T CARE IF YOU WERE GROUNDED FOR A LONG TIME!! YOU SHOULD HAVE FOUND SOME OTHER WAY TO UPDATE!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
But anyway, back to your fic (not that I was ever talking about it). I like this chapter. It was, as my sister (gami-chan) would say, ‘mad hilar’. I laughed so hard that my sides hurt. Still... *Everyone groans, guessing what’s coming next) YOU TOOK TO LONG!! I WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! WITCH MEANS THAT YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON OR ELSE I WILL TORTURE YOU REPEATEDLY AT SCHOOL! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (I like to do that. The laugh and the torturing, that is.) IF YOU DON’T UPDATE SOON THEN I’LL TAKE BACK A BUNCH OF THAT POCKY THAT I GAVE YOU AT THE BEGINNING OF THIS REVIEW! (or rant)
As for those ideas that you begged me to give you at school, I finally thought of something. Make Hikou fall in love with one of your original characters and do a bunch of crazy stuff to impress her and make her like him! (In other words, he tries to impress her, but keeps messing up.) Yes, I know, it’s a really dumb idea, BUT AT LEAST I THOUGHT OF SOMETHING! THAT’S BETTER THAN YOU COULD DO! SO THERE! *sticks out her tongue at Jiro Hikari* Besides, it has the potential for fluff as well as comedy. In other words, it fills all the requirements! SO THERE!! *sticks out her tongue again*
Right. Now that I have that out of my system (or do I?), back to talking about the story. This chapter is really good, as I said before. But at one point near the beginning, you start using ‘s instead of “s when they speak. You stop, but I just thought that I’d point that out to you. And if your not grounded anymore, you really need to continue reading my fic. You said that you were going to, but you still haven't read past the first chapter! (or at least as far as I know) But back to the story, AGAIN. *Hydra-Star begins to bang her head on the wall to keep herself on track* Your new characters (the original ones) are really interesting. It’ll be fun to see what they end up being like. But I’ve got to go. My mom’s calling me. *everyone breaths a long sigh of relief* Bye bye. I’ll see you at school tomorrow.
Hydra-Star
P.S. Sorry for all the misspellings. As I said in my last review, you know what a horrible speller. |
 Ari and Kat 2003-11-07 . chapter 2BWA HA HA HA!
YES! HIKO RETURNS!
TAKE IT, KENSHIN GUMI!
Sano ought to be a... chicken!
ANd Yahiko could be... a... tanuki! BEcause he always called Kaoru that! BWA HA HA HA!
Go in Peace and KEEP WRITING FOR GOD'S SAKE- ari |
 Ari and Kat 2003-11-07 . chapter 1It's so cute! I think... Ari would be a tan wolf demon if she were reincarnated as such... with... blue eyes!
^-^ I love it!
And YES! POCKY ROCKS! |
 Hydra-Star 2003-10-27 . chapter 2*Hydra-Star is bouncing around angrily in chibi form* YOU TOOK TO LONG! I MEAN, YOUR MOM GROUNDED YOU BECAUSE YOU GOT A B! NOW THAT'S REALLY PATHETIC! A B IS A GOOD GRADE! DOESN'T SHE KNOW THAT?! I can understand about your friend, but STILL! YOU SHOULD HAVE FOUND SOME WAY TO UPDATE SOONER ANYWAY!! *growls evilly* Yes. I know. I'm flaming you for no reason whatsoever. But when my fic (You know. The one I'm always bugging you about reading. Of course, you still don't, so I'm a bit annoyed with you right now. Maybe that's why I'm flaming you. That is, if you can call this a flame.) had two chapters, it didn't have ANY reviews. And you have 5. Well... 6 counting this one. If you can even think of this as a review. I call it ranting and raving about absolutely nothing discussing itself as a review. I only got my first review on my third chapter... I think... It was something like that.
ANYWAY... *Hydra-Star bangs herself on the head giving herself all sorts of bumps yelling at herself to get back on talk and actually talk about your fic* This is good. I like it. It’s really funny. I only have one thing to point out. (Besides all the other useless stuff I’ve already pointed out.) You say, "Why, we only sold one to a human man named Himura Kenshin around then. “ when you’re talking about Kenshin and Kaoru are buying there swords. And then later that they bought two. But there where only two reversed-blade swords (I’m assuming that that’s what sakabatou means since I don’t really know) ever made and Kenshin owned them both. The first was given to him by his master, and the second, he got in a fight.
Hm... *looks back over the review and realizes that it is probably the stupidest review that she’s ever written* Did I miss anything? Is there any more completely useless advise that I can give you? Hm... *there is a long pause in witch everyone hopes that she doesn't remember anything* I know! *everyone looks scared at the thought of what she may say next and Jiro Hikari backed up when she opens her mouth wide to scream something again* UPDATE OR OR I’LL COME AFTER YOU!! I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE! IF YOU DON’T ADD THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON, I WILL COME TO YOUR HOUSE AND MURDER YOU IN YOUR SLEEP! Hee Hee... Maybe I went a bit overboard. *”YOU THINK?!” Yells everyone. Hydra-Star doesn't seem to notice them.* Oh well. At least you get my point now.
Hydra-Star
P.S. READ MY FIC! YOU KNOW WITCH ONE I’M TALKING ABOUT! I’M GETTING IMPATIENT! Wait... I already am... Oh well. You get what I mean.
P.P.S. Sorry for all the misspellings. You know how bad of a speller I am. And if you don’t, then you’d better learn. |
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