for 'not doing a good job of writing nautical action' you've done a fine job here. Better than I could ever do.

Haven't you heard of using quotes, because those squares are totally confusing.

Okay. I'm going to be totally honest with you. I'm sorry if this seems mean, but this is how I feel.

I think that Jack is really not in character here. This is the first fanfic that I had read about POTC. And for days, I was totally distressed. Jack seemed so distant to me, like I couldn't really remember him. I really became distressed about the lack of Jack here...

love it! ha ha ha ha ha! i dont kno y but i just HAD to laugh ha ha ha ha ha

luve it!

I LOVED you story!

heerlijk verhaal, echt geweldig!! Als je nog goede ideën hebt voor zo'n verhaal, zeker uitschrijven!!

(: I'mma keep on reading.

I love this. (: She sounds lovely, with an edge per se. (: Jack seems to be in character as well.

A really good story, one that I canr ead again and again.

Wow...I love this story. I have been reading it, and just decided to review. Its so good! You capture many facets of the Captain Jack Sparrow that some people(coughcoughmecough) can't get quite right. I love it! You are a wonderful author!

Chrissie

Great story--wonderful job. I love the way you wrote Jack, and Janeen. The whole Jack OC thing--you really took it to a new level. Lots of unexpected turns and things I didn't expect. Very well done.

Renee M.

Wow, I started this fic last summer but when school started I didn't have the time to keep up with it. I'm glad I finished it and I really enjoyed reading it!! Thank you for a wonderful piece of reading! I love it! ;)

Verry Verry Good story. So Great.

This story is the best fan-fic I've read in a while. Keep up the good work.