This is a pretty cool and interesting story and I wouldn't mind seeing more chapters for it. Though it has been 4 years since it last updated it would be awesome to see it updating again.

love that story!love it!love it!love it!
so...UPDATE! xD

Cool! I want to help with the weenie roast. Or S'mores, whichever...I'm glad you decided to continue this. This is a very good plotline with no grammer or spelling errors that I detected. I wish I could write like this...

Hey, I love your story. It's neat and organized with excellent grammar and an intriguing plot...which actually makes sense instead of a bunch of ideas thrown in all at once. Good for you! I'm glad that the characters are staying in character, and I think Samus is turning out fine. Hurry up and update!

i beleave samus is not full blood human. and will this turn into a samus/fox paring? that culd start a whole sereas!

You're doig a great job.
Keep it up!

Great story hurry and review.

I really liked this chapter. In one part it reminds me of how HALO's MasterCheif preffers to live in his armor just like Samus. I also like how you portrayed Samus's Internal being and persona.

ggod

Wow, nice chapter. A little short, but good nonetheless. I do have one question tho: wouldn't samus have been dealing with this sort of thing (fighting, death, burning, etc) for so long that she would have found a way to deal with it by now? Just seemed a little "damsel in distress," not something really in samus's personality, if you understand what i'm trying to say.

I'm sure it was unintentional, it happens. Other than that tiny detail, this is a good story worth keeping up with. I look forward to more!

Dak

Very nice chapter! I enjoy this type of writing. I wish I could do as well with that type of writing... Well, I hope to see an update soon!

~Dr. W

Very excellent! Whee! Another update! I like the more human Samus, after all, she should have feelings! And I really, really, really, REALLY hope you'll update soon! I like this story a WHOLE lot!

good keep writing

Great job. I liked this, and I like the fact that Fox is getting deeper into Samus's past without her knowing.

Thanks for answering my question, it explains a little, though it didn't explain why they didn't see her on the Great Fox before they met Scales. Anyway, great job, hope to see more soon.

Ja ne!

Tim, DoL

You've got to update soon. There aren't many good cross-over fics, but I really like this one and can't wait to see what you've got in store for the two. I also love the interaction between them. It seems believable for their personalities.