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| LinKueiGrandmaster 2007-08-17 ch 1,  | abuselove that story!love it!love it!love it! so...UPDATE! xD |
| StarVix 2007-02-28 ch 11, | abuseCool! I want to help with the weenie roast. Or S'mores, whichever...I'm glad you decided to continue this. This is a very good plotline with no grammer or spelling errors that I detected. I wish I could write like this... |
| Shadow Seeker 2006-01-29 ch 11, anon. | abuseHey, I love your story. It's neat and organized with excellent grammar and an intriguing plot...which actually makes sense instead of a bunch of ideas thrown in all at once. Good for you! I'm glad that the characters are staying in character, and I think Samus is turning out fine. Hurry up and update! |
| secret 2005-12-06 ch 10, anon. | abusei beleave samus is not full blood human. and will this turn into a samus/fox paring? that culd start a whole sereas! |
| CrystalFlume 2005-06-27 ch 11, | abuseYou're doig a great job. Keep it up! |
| Lone Wolfs Darkness 2005-06-26 ch 11, | abuseGreat story hurry and review. |
| Lone Wolfs Darkness 2005-06-26 ch 10, | abuseI really liked this chapter. In one part it reminds me of how HALO's MasterCheif preffers to live in his armor just like Samus. I also like how you portrayed Samus's Internal being and persona. |
| pokemon-35055 2005-06-25 ch 11, | abuseggod |
| Dakyu 2005-06-24 ch 11, anon. | abuseWow, nice chapter. A little short, but good nonetheless. I do have one question tho: wouldn't samus have been dealing with this sort of thing (fighting, death, burning, etc) for so long that she would have found a way to deal with it by now? Just seemed a little "damsel in distress," not something really in samus's personality, if you understand what i'm trying to say. I'm sure it was unintentional, it happens. Other than that tiny detail, this is a good story worth keeping up with. I look forward to more! Dak |
| Dr.Wilopolis 2005-06-24 ch 11, | abuseVery nice chapter! I enjoy this type of writing. I wish I could do as well with that type of writing... Well, I hope to see an update soon! ~Dr. W |
| Dr.Wilopolis 2005-06-24 ch 10, | abuseVery excellent! Whee! Another update! I like the more human Samus, after all, she should have feelings! And I really, really, really, REALLY hope you'll update soon! I like this story a WHOLE lot! |
| pokemon-35055 2005-06-23 ch 10, | abusegood keep writing |
| Silverdash 2005-06-22 ch 10, | abuseGreat job. I liked this, and I like the fact that Fox is getting deeper into Samus's past without her knowing. Thanks for answering my question, it explains a little, though it didn't explain why they didn't see her on the Great Fox before they met Scales. Anyway, great job, hope to see more soon. Ja ne! Tim, DoL |
| Smashfan 2005-06-20 ch 9, anon. | abuseYou've got to update soon. There aren't many good cross-over fics, but I really like this one and can't wait to see what you've got in store for the two. I also love the interaction between them. It seems believable for their personalities. |
| Silverdash 2005-04-10 ch 9, | abuseOkay, I have a couple questions. Where's Falco and Krystal. After Andross was defeated a second time, Falco came back to Star Fox. Krystal joined as well; ever play Star Fox Assault? So Falco left again? And where's Krystal? Sorry, just wanting to know. Anyway, great fic. Update soon. Tim, DoL |