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| Safina Cazera 2008-08-16 ch 15,  | abusewow what can i say just found this site and this story is just brilliant so funny and imaginative absolutly loved it ~sarah~ |
| Carrie 2007-11-12 ch 15, anon. | abuseOMG! That was so good. i loved your story. i luvd wen they fell asleep together. it was so cute and the way he proposed. |
| rollingstone28 2007-10-28 ch 15, | abusethank you so much, that was the most beautiful storyy!! im going to look up your others now and find the legomance! |
| SriHellgirl25 2007-07-05 ch 6, | abusei'm sure people have answered this already but its from clue! it's one of my favorite movies so it was really cool to see it in there! |
| Lady Anne 2007-06-29 ch 15, | abuseI really liked reading this story. If you want to improve it, I would make two recommendations- #1. They fell in love way too quickly. You can expand the story and character development by having them fall in love over time. #2. Get rid of all the "Legolas/Haldir/Author" dialogue. It really takes away from the fic. My favorite scene was the snowball part. When she hit him in the head with the first one, my reaction was the exact same as hers. I put my hand over my mouth as I giggled. That was perfect! I look forward to looking at what other fics you've written. |
| hermonine 2007-02-13 ch 15, | abuseGreat story! |
| Anne Rose 2007-01-27 ch 10, | abuseFun story, but aren't Haldir's brothers twins? |
| Lady Lea 2007-01-07 ch 15, | abuseI JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT I REALLY ENJOYED YOUR STORY, I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR A GOOD ROMANCE AND YOUR STORY SATISFIRD MY CRAVING. THANK YOU, IT IS VERY HARD TO FIND A TRULY GOOD ROMANCE STORY. |
| roslyn 2006-10-16 ch 12, anon. | abuse*sob,sob* So sad...*blows nose*But it will get better,right? |
| SISM 2006-07-24 ch 15, | abuseAW! that was so sweet! i loved this story! i hope you write more like it! |
| IceBlack 2006-05-06 ch 15, | abuseWonderful story. |
| roslyn 2006-03-24 ch 12, anon. | abusemoans... Its...sad...(sobs) |
| Jujubee 2006-02-04 ch 4, anon. | abuseI like Losanna! She's sweet! |
| Jujubee 2006-02-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseI like the thoughts that you put in for Lindelea. This was a good chapter! |
| Jujubee 2006-02-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseI like the way this is going. hehe. :o) |