Beautiful :-)

I love how Seravy is just too sweet

Oh my God! I love this. This is the kind of humor and teasing Seravy and Dorothy does everyday. Now who said that being married would never fit them. They're not married yet but this is a dry run of livin together and they even act as a married couple even before. I really love this. I hope you get to right again.

funny and sweet... I hope you write more about Dorothy/Seravi )

It's cute. And so true.

OMG. I love this soo much. It's soo well written and beautiful.

You are really a talented writer! I love how you used the very descriptive words. Write more Seravi/Dorothy fics, kay?

I've always enjoyed your stories. They're one of a kind. It's so difficult to find authors like you nowadays, you're so full of talent. You should be proud of yourself.

That was so sweet, even a person reall y happy wedding jitters or something but i guess if you really love someone you would really do stupid things

Ahhh, how sweet! And you captured their personalities so well too. I wish there were more Akazukin Chacha fanfics out there with Seravi and Dorothy. :)

The ending was perfect too, and the setting just right, winter is the time to have ddep contempative thoughts about life in general :) hehe.

Hahaha...it is sooooooooooo funny when Seravi and Dorothy fight!

that was cute. You did a good job.

It's SWEET! :)

_ Kawaii one right there! Write more Dorothy/Seravi fics, eh? _

That was really sweet of Seravi to say that!

the ending was good! but labour could help get off that pound dorathy gained when Access came to visit!

*sigh* this is soooooo...cuteeee... I just love Dorothy/Seravi fics..

they're so damn cute... write a sequel pleezeeee...!