the ending was great really funny i had to wipe of my computer screen because i took a sip of my drink as i was reading and it just made me laugh so hard.

YOU ARE A SICK PERSON! WHAT'S THE POINT OF WASTING SPACE LIKE THIS?

seasoning... what the hell! damn dumb Lu... anyway liked it funny as hell and as for the guy that said you should burn in hell... F-U-&*(( HIM honestly... have some sense of humor for godsakes!

KEEP IT UP!

YOU ARE A SICK PERSON, I MEAN SICK AND WRONG. DEAR GOD, WHAT THE HELL WERE THINKING WHENE YOU WROTE THIS? AND I DO AGREE YOU DO NEED TO BE SHOT FOR THIS! I HOPE YOU BURN IN HELL!

LOL! OMG, I loved it. Youreally have a talent for this kind of stuff. Again, I loved it and you should write more like it. .

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA ur more messed up then i am!

hehe that was funny it remide me of beer part i amricn pie

I find this story both sick and twisted, I LOVE IT! Lol, the punch bowl...seasoning...damn this is the only spot of good twisted humour on the entire blue gender area of this site.

Heh heh. Well, I must say, at least the story is well written! It doesn't seem to hold the characters in...well...character as well as perhaps it should...but this was a great laugh.

Very nice idea by the way...basing it on a song...

I like crazy, no-sense fics! I should too, seeing as I also have a twisted mind _

lol! oh, my god! 'whats the white stuff in the punch?'? *sigh* well...that was entertaining ...pointless beond reason, but entertaining all the same. you and your friends have alot of free time... i wish i had it made like you...

That was some pretty funny shit. Lol.

first the chocolate cake from The Matrix, then the chocolate pretzels from Mallrats, now punch! soon i will be unable to eat/drink anything! this was great! i love it!

that was sick and twisted

ROFLOL... I can not stop laughing. Especially with that seasoning lines. Keep up the good work.