Finally a fanfiction that is readable! Making this pure romance is risky, but looks like it will turn out well. I like your style; it's a good balance of description and dialog. Write on!

I've always envisioned Kael's younger, uncorrupted self to be the classic, clueless male when it came to women.

My dear, dear Prince, you may think you are being cute and coy but in actuality...you're coming off as a creeper. ^^;

YC: Aw, I love it. I hope to see more soon! *adds to alerts*

I love to imagine that the prologue is Arthas and Jaina being romancey kissey lovey *3* ... Yes.. I do.. That is all.. The rest kinda confuses me probably cuz I'm dumb...
All in all.. I love the prologue to peices if that is Arthas and Jaina... m *eats it*

The Kk reviewer is perfectly aware of how old the story is, but he read it before and thought it was great but forgot to review.


End o' the story!

Hey, this is a great story, I wonder what'll happen... Man, I can't wait! Jaina's my favorite character so I hope she ends up with someone good... I pray to the Light she will...
Anyway, I think this is cool, keep it up, you're doing great! (I wonder what would happen if she ended up with Arthas... man that's different...)

This might sound odd, but after the inevitability of where she ends up, you could REALLY mak eyour readers go "wtf?" by hinting at some Thrall/Jaina.
Not that im seriously suggesting it, or saying its a GOOD idea, but it surely would be great for shock value, ne?
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:D i cant beleive i havent reviewed for this yet! im sure ive read it before :/
its a good story...for those who like romantic fics :D im not that into em but this is kinda interesting ;)

*snicker* Let me say that your modified Frozen Throne scene is quite amusing. Oh, and the rest of the first chapter is good, too. *g*

Seriously though, well done. The characterizations are quite good, although something about Antonidas and Jaina's conversation about her father's letter felt a bit off to me. Maybe it was the subject matter or perhaps it was just that I'm not used to seeing these two share a scene despite their master/student relationship. Still, that's only a minor complaint and probably more a case of personal preference than anything else. Sylvanas and Kael'Thos were well written and described, and seeing a lovesick version of Kael'Thos ought to be interesting, to say the least, though how that'll differ from depressed, vengeance-consumed Kael'Thos remains to be seen. Enje and Erdino show promise too. As for which pairing I prefer, I'm a T/J fan. *g* However, since that relationship isn't likely to go beyond friendship I'd change my answer to K/J...except for the fact that I'm a Kael'Thos/Vashj fan which leaves the A/J pairing...but since I'm also a semi Arthas/Sylvanas fan a problem arises. Perhaps the matter of who Jaina should be paired with is a question best left for her talk show. Please, keep up the good work.

Another great story! keep going!

Interested in this one for Shattered Enigma too?

You know how to get ahold of me...dark-elk@ananzi.co.za

Fight on,
Dark-Elk

I never really cared for fantasy romances; I thought they got in the way of the more fun parts of a fantasy. Then I saw Murg's spectacular little novella, and I saw it could be done and still incorporate everything I love about WarCraft.

Given that it can be done, you are certainly more than talented enough to carry it out. If there had been any doubt of this fact in my mind, this chapter has extinguished those doubts soundly. Well done.

I am intrigued... I never cared for Kael either, but perhaps you'll do a better job with him than Blizzard did. Hopefully.

On a side note, I've gotten too lazy to log in for every review anymore. If anyone cares enough to look at my profile, ff.net's convenient URL thingy will get you there. Isn't it nice?

fanfiction.net/~foreverjake/

Good work, J.

A new fic, eh. Hum... a fine chapter, though I am not really into romantic stories.

Ah, wonderful. Nice to read a Warcraft fic that doesn't involve vengence or betrayal. (Yet, that's why we all love it, right?) Yum. I'm assuming the prince is Arthas? Oh Arthas! *Sighs* He is such a bastard sometimes..Anyways, great story, and do update soon!