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| 801-addict 2008-04-09 ch 1,  | abusethis is my favorite pairing in MGS and im glad this is the first fic for it i read. I was a beautiful fic. the last line hit me hard. |
| bladeprincess9 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseSo bitter sweet and nicely written. |
| fearth bloodlust 2006-11-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseah run for the hills, that smile can only mean death is at hand for any that get in jacks way. all hearts that are torn from a loved one or at lost with grife makes any persone a deadly force to rekan with no matter what the sex, race or even age. that was nicely writen. |
| ScarrFace 2006-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like this story.Sure it's short but it packs a punch!^_^ |
| CiyFox 2004-10-12 ch 1, | abuseShort yet sweet. Poor Raiden. i like this one, it kinda gave me a new insight on Vamp. |
| Ry 2004-08-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeyond great :) VideoBrit - They face off against each other, but they have no reason except "I'm on this team, he's on that team, ergo we must fight" (unless there's some long forgotten scene in which Vamp spills Raiden's pint, I'm happy to stick by this view) And they're not in love in-game, this takes place in some alternate tangent reality. Here they've been locked up together and bonded. I will have to point out the time frame is a little rushed - if they ~were~ locked up together, sure the first few days would work out. But 3 days in and they're together? *shrugs* It could happen. You did good here, Vamp is one of my favourite characters ever, and you got him down to a "t". I can see him giving the "live your life" speech they have in movies all the time :) Wonderful! ~Ry~ |
| Vilde Marie Fossum 2004-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh god, It's so sad! I cried when I read it. And I cry when i think about it! I just can't get it out of my mind! I haunts me. And It's beautifully written. And I should know, 'cause my mother's a writer. Not very much helpful critique here, but I just had to speak my mind. |
| Secondson 2004-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent work - very nice, very touching. |
| subliminal robot 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseVideo Brit it is called ONE SHOTS!! Meaning she dosen't have to do that ^^. And further more I like Vamp/Raiden its cute and angsty |
| sunnymario 2003-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abusegood to see u here:) yeah...i know that's not gonna happen but i like it anyway. very sweet story indeed, although it remind me Titanic. |
| VideoBrit 2003-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThat is really damn bizarre. Raiden and Vamp? They tried to kill each other. There is no frigging way that they could be in love. I hate these sorts of slash fics anyway. The writing isn't bad, it's really pretty good in spots, but it's conceptually flawed. And you don't describe where they're being held, how they got there, any of that - someone reading it thinking it was straight after the ending of MGS2 would be mega-confused. |
| Anonymous 2003-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseIn the game...Raiden/Jack faces off against Vamp, and they certainly can't get along well. Furthermore, Vamp appears to be an immortal (he had 'died' 4 deaths, 3 in the game) and can't be killed by mere mortals... Still...it's all right. Good job. |
| Anonymous 2003-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseIn the game...Raiden/Jack faces off against Vamp, and they certainly can't get along well. Furthermore, Vamp appears to be an immortal (he had 'died' 4 deaths, 3 in the game) and can't be killed by mere mortals... Still...it's all right. Good job. |
| BlackRiku 2003-09-17 ch 1, | abuseHey that was good and I don't even know who the characters are:) |