Hey, it's me (Rhizae) yet again, with a new name this time. This story's really cool, please keep going! I love the dark, eerie mood it has. I like Norse mythology, and I was glad to see this story is pretty accurate :-) Very nice.

Me again.. Yay, new chapter!

Very well written. Your imagery is wonderful, very descriptive; I love the atmosphere, the mood of the story... very creepy. I'm curious; is this Dagger of Entropy something actually told of in Norse myth, or something you made up? Either way, very cool.

One small nitpicky grammar thing I'd like to point out:

"regained it's normal appearance."

Well, "it's" should really be "its." You do this a lot throughout the story, so I just wanted to let you know... when the word is used as a possessive (as in the sentence I quoted) there is no apostrophe. "it's" is a contraction of "it is." Again, that's not extremely important or anything, just wanted to let you know.

In conclusion: as I've said before, this story is excellent--update soon! Must read more!

Wow...! Very, VERY good...very good... This story is great, I love it! Wonderful!