Great story. I love the uniqueness of it.

it is a very good story are you going to continue it

I agree with the third option. For all the years it's taken you to write the basic intro, it is interesting. If by rewriting it you move faster, then I'm all for it. For a first story, it is good. Congrats on the B in organic! I could never quite get the idea of isomers, nevermind putting everything together! And then there's the slight memory problem...

this is getting intresting please update it,ll be intreating to see how things go with taka

Hm... well, before I go into my opinion on whether or not you should rewrite it, I just want to tell you this story is amazing! :) You've really worked it out well. Although it was a bit confusing about the Citadel and Harry's familiar - I still don't know what he is - it was okay as long as you pretended they were completely made up. Actually, I don't know if you made them up or not, as you did mention a lot of Japanese fangirlism, but you didn't say what bits were Japanese and what weren't.

Going back to that, I think that whatever helps you write this story should be done. If rewriting it will ensure this story continues, then do that. If not, don't.

Thanks so much for writing this story :)

this is a great story, i cant wait to see what happens next

Cool!

Aww, c'mon... update already. =) Great chapter, and good luck with then next one.

awesome story please udapte asap please it was an honor to read your story

Great story. :) Plz update asap. :)

I like this fic. Its kinda unique. Though that might be because I have never heard of Ramna 1/2 (not sure what it means). I am hoping that as I read on the stuff that I dont know will be explained.

I really like this story and I think you should continue it, so perhaps the last option is best? :D
Even with the 'Japanese fangirl-ism' this is still quite a good story, sometimes stories don't need to delve too deeply into other cultures to be successfull. I believe this to be so in this case.
Anyway, up to you, but I'd love to know what you've decided to do so give me a buzz back if you can :)

Leave the story up and post the new one separate. This gives you a chance to grow as an author as you force yourself to adapt to a different writing style. The more you write, the more you will change. By keeping old stories and forcing your self to adapt to writing in a style and voice which is no longer yours, you add strength and depth to your developing style.

wow i love this story please update soon

I really like this story, and although i agree that going through it could be helpful, it IS good how it is now. I like how Harry has an afinity with music, there isn't enough featured in the both JK's books and fics that people write. I also like the idea of isolated universe-thingys and constellations. Is that idea from something else, or did you come up with it one your own? Either way, it works well with the story without overwhelming it with confusing and technical jargon.
Go ahead and rewrite this fic, but keep updating this one and please let us know when you post the re-vamped version!