Are you still writing this?

I like this story alot. Although similiar plots has been repeatedly used by many authors, yours simply stood out. I find the plot simple (maybe because it hasn't been fully developed yet) but it has attracted me in a way when I know I have stumbled upon my good luck. You managed to develop the story with fitting words that allow readers to imagine the setting and all without awkward explanations. A great assest I highly regard. There were occasional typos but still good.

I am greatly saddended upon seeing that you have not updated this story since 2003, and the chances of you doing so might not be very high. I am guessing that you have already lost interest in this anime. Very much the same for me too. However, after reading this, I find myself anticipating the next chapter, which I fervently hope that you would write.

Nevertheless, I submitted this review not to insist that you continue this terrific fic, but to commend you on your writing skills. I myself may not possess such ability given my current state of mind (i've been having author's block for two an a half years, and it sucks). Not that I was particularly good at what I like to do, but I'm trying. :-)

Xelrina

Well, that was intriguing. Nice work on the suspense portion so far.

AH! No Solain T_T that is cruel. I want to know what happens next. OMG! THAT is Middie? OMG! Holy crap, I didn't see that coming at all. I mean wow I am in such a shock.
Please update soon and let us know what is going to happen next. PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE! I Wanna know what happens next!
Ja ne
Cat Youkai

*goes wided-shock* What did you just say?

Leah: I can't believe this assassin is related to Une! *fans WSA*

WSA: Whew..that was unexpected, not even my story is that intense. Could you read it? Maybe you could give me some tips. please!

Leah: she only has four chapters written, anyway just write more..

OMG! Can yu say CLIFFHANGER! Yu can't just leave me there like that! I LUV middie! Really good job. Great descriptions. next chap. pleeze...hurry!

Please write MORE!I love this story!

Solain you remember me, ne? *smiles* I didn't know you started a new story. Any ways. YOUR BACK INTO GUNDAM WING _ YEAH! I will read more later. I am tired and slightly sick. So I will read more tomorrow when I get home from school. Ja ne

Cat Youkai

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Wow, that was the "big chapter"! Please don't leave this on a cliffhanger!

I love your story! Hey listen! I am writing a story similiar to this. It is called 'Perfect Warrior'. Maybe you could check it out. (note: I am not done yet)

THIS IS SO COL! Please please please please don't leave it there we need to know hwat happens! I know I often repeat myself, but that's usually because i can't think of anything else to say besides, "PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!"

Uh oh! Busted! Can't wait for more! Please hurry!

Wow.

Finally, another G-wing story that has commendable writing, an inruiging plot, no bulls**t and Middie Une (that was an easy one to guess from the very first chap)! Hope you update soon, VERY soon, my mind's itchin for more...

Isn't that Lady Une? I thought she was in the Preventors. Leading them, in fact! Well, that's about as far as my knowledge of GW goes. I haven't seen much of the series. Anyway, glad you didn't kill Quat-kun or Duo-sama! _

Chibi Anya: Me too!

Yeah... you don't want to mess with my chibi muse. She is besotted with her kitty Quat...

Chibi Anya: *purrs and hugs Quat-plushie*

*prays with Duo* Don't let Quat-kun die... please don't let Quat-kun die...