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Grinning Dead
2009-10-19 . chapter 21
Huh I thought this story died... Welcome back I guess agh I've come up with so many story lines from that fight scene and I always wondered if any of them would come close to happening. Well I'm glad I get to find out how many phases will there be by the way?
"The Price Is Right" fan
2009-10-06 . chapter 21
"Your immaturity as a writer?"

My God. You were already one of the best authors on this site. I can't wait to see what the new version of this story looks like if you feel you've gotten even *better* since the last update.
Xeiden
2009-09-28 . chapter 21
If you can not think anything asks for help or advice there are many possibilities (The Seven Great Demon Lords, Royal knights, Yggdrasil, d-reaper, which are transported to another season like digimon savers for example) also if you can not think anything can always put the story on adoption, is too good to leave it behind
Phoenixsun
2009-09-20 . chapter 21
Even if this was an Author's Note, I am glad that there still some life left in this fic. This has easily been one of the top 5 Digimon stories I've read, top 3 concerning Tamers, so I've been checking every so often hoping for an update. This fic show true promise, it has a nice twisty plotline and pretty good character behavior, and the interaction between Takato and Impmon is just plain fun.
I know from experience how overwhelming a fic can become to the point you can organize your ideas into the next chapter. Don't know if you have try, but having someone to bounce ideas off helps a lot, that's how I managed to salvage one of my stories.
Once again, I'm happy that this fic has not been abandoned and I'll be in the look out for its revision.
The Chaos Master
2009-09-08 . chapter 21
I haven't read you story because I noticed that the last chapter was a author's note, however I wanted to ask if you plan on having Takato unleash the Digital Hazard in this story too. (I say Takato because I think that Guilmon being/having the Digital Hazard to be bs, mainly because Takato CREATED Guilmon and I'm sure he didn't say "Hey why don't I give this digimon the power to end the Digital World", plus, what kind of human can create a digimon, not a normal one that's for sure, not even a normal Digidestined/Tamer could do that.
Redhazard
2009-09-06 . chapter 21
I have been following this story since the beginning and this is probably the first time I reviewed it. I can only tell you that I have enjoyed this story immensely and I am glad that it won't be abandoned. I wish you the best of luck.
Kit Ninja
2009-09-05 . chapter 21
Well after rereading these chapters I do realize what you are saying. Its been a little over 2-3 years of reading this story myself though I was sad that it hadn't continued in a while. Even though you had given Impmon a evolution to Devimon I do hope that beelzemon would be making an appearance some time. I love that evolved form of his.

Though it does make me sad that I can not update my stories any time soon as my laptop which help all my story info and such is still in repair. *Sigh* I might as well just save up the money to buy a new one.
Azure Neko
2009-09-02 . chapter 21
Are you serious? I only just discovered this story and you're starting over? For the love of...
Dark Tamer
2009-09-02 . chapter 21
I shall cheer you on for the rewrite...don't worry it's happened to me too and I think for now I have silently given up.
Hap Perry
2009-09-01 . chapter 21
I have just read your new update and I wanted to say that this has been one of my stories since the first time I read it three years ago. I hope you successfully rewrite it as it would be truly sad for this story to go unfinished as it is one of the best digimon fics I have ever read.

May your muse always be helpful.
Ma Jr.
2009-09-01 . chapter 21
Yisnai InfinityBlade,

I'm pleased to see that you didn't give up even after a few years rolled by. It's true that people change over time along with their ways that they express themselves. For a while this was actually one of my top favorites, I even printed it out and reread it. I must of read it about a dozen times, I actually don't usually do that with any story, fanfiction or book. Don't let the negative comments get you down, this rewrite that you plan to do I look forward to, to be able to start reading the story from the begining again with a fresh attitude. I look forward to reading your story again InfinityBlade, I'll probably end up printing it out and puting it with the original. Keep the great work up and don't stop writing.

Morwen,
Ma Junior
YumeTakato
2009-09-01 . chapter 21
I know I'm looking forward to it- I'll be around- even to re-read. See ya next time!
Katsugi
2009-09-01 . chapter 21
Hey, at least you have the balls to update after four years. SOme of us *me included* just drop our stories without saying something. People get bored and with such a long wait period, your ideas have changed. So what if we waited four years for Impmon get to adult lvl. Who really cares. When he evolved it felt natural and I remember giggling in excitement.
Quality over quantity, ya know. It may have been my longest wait for adult lvl, but hey it was one of my favorite evolution scenes in fanfiction. (Ok, I imagined it to be awesome)

I'm glad you are feeling a bit more dedicated now and at least you left us with something. Besides, you aren't getting paid for this. What do we have to complain about other than being mildly discontent we lost another promising story to boredom?

Anyways, glad you are back and I hope this story actually makes it to completion. I wonder if you could be one of the few people that actually finish their fanfiction epic now.
rgm0005
2009-09-01 . chapter 21
So your rewriting this, huh? Sounds interesting. And since I know you're a good writer, I'll be following that fic like I followed this one. I'm a bit saddened by that cliffhanger though.

Regardless, I wish you good luck.
Vegeta the 3rd
2009-09-01 . chapter 21
damn, I didn't think such a great story would be forced into a mental block like this. I mean, I thought it was really good. Well, I guess I'll take this experience to heart and try to make my stories not suffer the same fate.

All and all, it was an amazing read, even with those two small scenes. I personally thought your writing was amazing, but it WAS a tad forced, considering how you made everyone forced into battles in repetitive succession, including those who are too stubborn to die (coughIceDevimoncoughEvilmoncough). But that sort of thing was what made it exciting too.

As long as you're going to start fresh, here's my bit of advice; pace yourself. Write this for fun and not for the constant bickering of people leaving short posts saying 'update plz!' Your fanfic is great beyond words; heck, it received recommendation from TV Tropes FanFicRecs. It's that cool man, so I find it a bit hard to believe you can make it better.

Doesn't mean I won't stop waiting and hoping though. This is the best Digimon fic I've read since Zero 2: A Revision.

-Vegeta the 3rd

-P.S. don't take what I said the wrong way; I try to say this to every author I believe leaves a great inspiring impression in his/her novels.
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